【笔墨留香】诗社每日一联第119期2023年3月14日

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<p class="ql-block">出句:菲儿</p><p class="ql-block">1</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:千秋白帝庙烟浓【老高】</p><p class="ql-block">【悄然简评】</p><p class="ql-block">镶嵌白帝庙。庙烟浓韵味寡淡了些些。</p><p class="ql-block">2</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三杯古井贡香醇【花火牡丹】</p><p class="ql-block">【悄然简评】</p><p class="ql-block">镶嵌古井贡,“贡”字失味了:春有味,贡如何香呢?这种带技巧性质的句子,若不能技巧与联意双兼,个人建议首先保全联意。</p><p class="ql-block">3</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三杯老窖酒香浓【最美的坟墓】</p><p class="ql-block">【悄然简评】</p><p class="ql-block">中规中矩的对句。老窖与酒的承接比较直白,没对出碧螺与春之间韵味。</p><p class="ql-block">4</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:千年沧海史观深(香雪儿)</p><p class="ql-block">【悄然简评】</p><p class="ql-block">上下句之间的关联性弱一些。对联没有诗的起承转合,没有必要的铺陈和意境。“对联”之联需要上下句之间“意”相联。</p><p class="ql-block">5</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:数声脆舌晓声添【青莲】</p><p class="ql-block">【悄然简评】</p><p class="ql-block">对句为上联营造了时间和氛围。唯脆舌与晓之关联性稍弱了些些。</p><p class="ql-block">6</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:百年香雪海情浓【掬水月在手】</p><p class="ql-block">【悄然简评】</p><p class="ql-block">刻意于香雪与海的关联,对句中“海情”二字硬了些。</p><p class="ql-block">7</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半杯清友自怡情【挥翰】</p><p class="ql-block">【悄然简评】</p><p class="ql-block">清友,茶之别称,与碧螺春有合掌之嫌。后三不对仗。</p><p class="ql-block">8</p><p class="ql-block">出句: 一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句: 数声沧海使情深【云淡】</p><p class="ql-block">【悄然简评】</p><p class="ql-block">对句前四后三关联性弱,使字失对。</p><p class="ql-block">9</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:两颗红杏透香来【清风雅居】</p><p class="ql-block">【悄然简评】</p><p class="ql-block">颗,犯平仄。透,失对。</p><p class="ql-block">10</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:满眸西地锦花香【曼珠沙华】</p><p class="ql-block">【悄然简评】</p><p class="ql-block">出句中镶嵌碧螺春茶,对句嵌西地锦之词牌。</p> <p class="ql-block">11</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:满圈美女色妆浓【多情公子】</p><p class="ql-block">12</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:几行小字墨香浓【风吹麦浪】</p><p class="ql-block">13</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:几行淡墨黛痕轻【刀刀】</p><p class="ql-block">14</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:满笺青玉案香萦【紫月】</p><p class="ql-block">15</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三杯浊酒客愁多【彩虹】</p><p class="ql-block">16</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:十年水墨画风明【籽粒】</p><p class="ql-block">17</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:四围竹韵翠香凝【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">18</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:四围翠竹鸟声幽【那朵桃花】</p><p class="ql-block">19</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半笺小字墨香浓【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">20</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:满庭淑气物华浓【秋的惆怅】</p> <p class="ql-block">21</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:千枝红杏蝶必怡【十三香】</p><p class="ql-block">22</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:千山香雪客愁难【月色依然】今</p><p class="ql-block">23</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三枝红芍药香浓【丁平思】</p><p class="ql-block">23</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半窗明月梦魂牵【柳岩】</p><p class="ql-block">24</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:满笺锦字旧情深【夏雨悠扬】</p><p class="ql-block">25</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三杯西凤酒情深【晓春】</p><p class="ql-block">26</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:千行墨字古风浓【明镜非台】</p><p class="ql-block">27</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三杯浊酒客愁多【彩虹】</p><p class="ql-block">28</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:几杯浊酒旧情深【漫步】</p><p class="ql-block">29</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三包龙井香气浓【倪克旺】</p><p class="ql-block">30</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三杯绿蚁客情浓【君羊】</p><p class="ql-block">31</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半庭梅蕊暗香浓【重庆月亮】</p><p class="ql-block">32</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三杯香雪晓寒轻【童心】</p><p class="ql-block">33</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半坛女儿红韵浓【掬水月在手】</p><p class="ql-block">34</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三年白日梦心多【哇!】</p><p class="ql-block">35</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:四围竹韵翠香凝【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">36</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:两杯绿蚁夏情浓【龙吟九渊】</p><p class="ql-block">37</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:两行小字女儿娇【橙子】</p><p class="ql-block">38</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:满林香雪海风柔【玉蝶】</p><p class="ql-block">39</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:几枝红杏景光明【丫丫】</p> <p class="ql-block">40</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:数行小字我心闲【无悔】</p><p class="ql-block">41</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:佳人丹凤眼神羞【乐天】</p><p class="ql-block">42</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:两杯鸡尾酒难调【佳儿】</p><p class="ql-block">43</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:几杯单井绿汤清【邓洁】</p><p class="ql-block">44</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半杯竹叶青香浮【依依】</p><p class="ql-block">45</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半窗竹影几席清【远方】</p><p class="ql-block">46</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:千行狂草墨痕浓【天行健】</p><p class="ql-block">47</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:满庭桃花暖香频【等你在雨中】</p><p class="ql-block">48</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半瓶西凤酒香浓【曹刿论绽】</p><p class="ql-block">49</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:满窗翠竹晓风凉【秋月】</p><p class="ql-block">50</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:两杯红枣酒香浓【无言的沉默】</p><p class="ql-block">51</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:几弦韵律曲声悠【芬芳】</p><p class="ql-block">52</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:两杯红酒色香浓【文雅】</p><p class="ql-block">53</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:几坛丹醴酱香浓【清净本然】</p> <p class="ql-block">54</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:千张新画墨香浓【味可可】</p><p class="ql-block">55</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:两盅交杯酒幸福【東方】</p><p class="ql-block">56</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半杯古井酒香浓【痴心不改】</p><p class="ql-block">57</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:两杯汾酒韵香长【兰兮】</p><p class="ql-block">58</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三山香雪海天长【罗马雄风】</p><p class="ql-block">59</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:四周翠竹画情浓【子衿】</p><p class="ql-block">60</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:两堤金缕曲声清【老吴】</p><p class="ql-block">61</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:满腔雪佛兰词贫【哇!】</p><p class="ql-block">62</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半窗黄菊秋光浓【岸芷汀兰】</p><p class="ql-block">63</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:两杯汾酒韵香浓【兰兮】</p><p class="ql-block">64</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三瓶龙井绿香浓【倪哥】</p><p class="ql-block">65</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:十根玉指妙音流【晓晓】</p><p class="ql-block">66</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半轮明月故乡浓【安然】</p><p class="ql-block">67</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:千年古井贡香浓【品茗听雨】</p><p class="ql-block">68</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半杯绿蚁客情浓【七字余句】</p><p class="ql-block">69</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:满杯白兰地香浓【荒园】</p><p class="ql-block">70</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:几行青玉案情真【正能量路遥】</p><p class="ql-block">71</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三杯乌龙情谊浓【布衣木子】</p><p class="ql-block">72</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:四方金砚墨心浓【明婉】</p><p class="ql-block">73</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:孤坟蝴蝶梦香甜【孤读求拜】</p><p class="ql-block">74</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:多重深院月姿柔【自言自语】</p><p class="ql-block">75</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:百年老窖酒香浓【山里红】</p><p class="ql-block">76</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:十年旧友故情浓【颜开运畅】</p> <p class="ql-block">77</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半杯清水友情深【杨云贵】</p><p class="ql-block">78</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半窗明月夜光寒【青果】</p><p class="ql-block">79</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:千秋大业帝心欢【像风一样自由】</p><p class="ql-block">80</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半池红蕾蝶身斜【青云直上】</p><p class="ql-block">81</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三分稚气燕声迷【九妹】</p><p class="ql-block">82</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三杯鸡尾酒香醇【王志翔】</p><p class="ql-block">83</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三千小朵素心盈【云水谣】</p><p class="ql-block">84</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:满园翠竹晓香浓【淡看浮云】</p><p class="ql-block">85</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:千秋青史岁华浓【喜仔】</p><p class="ql-block">86</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:满山青翠鸟声长【化蝶】</p><p class="ql-block">87</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三行小字韵情痴【逸客】</p><p class="ql-block">88</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三杯青竹叶功奇【鹤舞】</p><p class="ql-block">89</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三杯绿蚁酒香浮【若耶秋水】</p><p class="ql-block">90</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:千山桃李蕊香浓【人面桃花】</p><p class="ql-block">91</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:几枝红杏朵儿香【蓝岚】</p><p class="ql-block">92</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三山香雪海风清【罗马雄风】</p><p class="ql-block">93</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:千年黄鹤阁情深【大程】</p><p class="ql-block">94</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:声声垓下曲音愁【针行】</p><p class="ql-block">95</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半杯绿蚁酒香醇【红尘】</p><p class="ql-block">96</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:千枝红杏蝶心怡【十三香】</p><p class="ql-block">97</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:两条落水狗够呛【彭国良】</p><p class="ql-block">98</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三坛国窖酒香浓【缘聚】</p> <p class="ql-block">99</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:两行白鹭画屏新【清月】</p><p class="ql-block">100</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:两幅字画友情深【如意如愿】</p><p class="ql-block">101</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:千杯绿蚊意情深【成钧】</p><p class="ql-block">102</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:千丝细柳燕声留【雨寒】</p><p class="ql-block">103</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:几声清笛客心欢【紫薇】</p><p class="ql-block">104</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:千秋赤壁水波平【杨杨】</p><p class="ql-block">105</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半支秃笔俗心清【一新】</p><p class="ql-block">106</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三行小字客情浓【韵】</p><p class="ql-block">107</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半瓶竹叶世心宽【柳眉儿】</p><p class="ql-block">108</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:满壶绿蚁友情浓【知足常乐】</p><p class="ql-block">109</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:几壶龙井雅情悠【梦若流云】</p><p class="ql-block">110</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半笺青玉案香浓【君子兰CLJ】</p><p class="ql-block">111</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半弯小月别愁盈【嫣然】</p><p class="ql-block">112</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:盈伓小花恋情长【明月】</p><p class="ql-block">113</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:几层白塔寺香浓【天马行空】</p><p class="ql-block">114</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:几声更漏子归啼【木头】</p><p class="ql-block">115</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:几颗红豆相思浓【紫云汐风】</p><p class="ql-block">116</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半帘月色客愁添【执手温酒】</p><p class="ql-block">117</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三篇风雅颂诗浓【素言】</p><p class="ql-block">118</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半坛美酒桂香浓【花香依然】</p><p class="ql-block">119</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:半杯绿蚁酒肠宽【木樨】</p><p class="ql-block">120</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:几张青玉案头新【书兰】</p><p class="ql-block">121</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:满厅一剪梅香浓【护花使者】</p><p class="ql-block">122</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:满壶口子窖香浓【老头】</p><p class="ql-block">123</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:几盆兰草蕊香浓【布衣】</p><p class="ql-block">124</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一盏碧螺春味足【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:三秋黄菊晚怀清【南天青】</p>