<p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">跟着恩师文凯大姐</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">学写一七令</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一七令,词牌名,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">又名“金塔词”</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">要求每联对仗</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">【-七令•志】</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">韦式体(第三部•仄声)</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">志。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">深期,远寄。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">趁馀年,寻韵事。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夙愿犹记,新知又启。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">读书学忘机,敲句思解意。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗成淑气云拥, 梦入春阴雀喜。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夕阳灯影入清宵,晴霭墨痕呈稔岁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">2023.01.28</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">【一七令•勤】</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">白居易体(第六部•勤)</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">勤。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">逸兴,忙人。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">能起早,得思频。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">徐行转战,自适追奔。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">灯前寻妙趣,几上醉清尊。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">愿与律诗乍见,相期章法初闻。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">老眼古香多汲取,小词春意再耕耘。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">2023.01.29</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">【一七令•耕】</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:18px;">白居易体(第十一部•平声)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">耕。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">子种,芽萌。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">篱园小,苦心凝。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">春濡苗白,夏逐葱青。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">柿瓜光影动,椒韭菜香盈。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">浇灌蝶飞欲语,耘除花舞多情。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">风雨同携衣汗浸,亲朋喜见酒茶呈。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">2023.01.30</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">【一七令</span>•<span style="font-size:20px;">有】</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">韦式体(第十二部•仄声)</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">有。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">长持,固守</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">识香浓,知味厚。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">养志怡兴,延年益寿。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">战疫共登临,安康同抖擞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">今与老伴携手,每向亲听问候。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">乐寻膝下子孙欢,闲享眼中词赋趣。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">2023.02.01</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">【一七令•获】</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">韦式体(第十六部•仄声)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">获。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">心期,手捉。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">笑同欢,思相索。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">两目清切,馀生澹泊。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">妪赋唤春来,诗歌邀蜂落。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">斜阳喜觅收翠,烟色欢探得乐。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">频催晴晓日腾驰,颇爱晚霞时领握。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">2023.02.02</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">《一七令》创作要求:诗题(自选)第一字即为诗韵,单调五十五字,十三句,七平韵,二句起句句对仗。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">词谱</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">平韵。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">中仄句,平平韵。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">平中仄句,仄平平韵。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">平中中仄句,中中中平韵。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">中平平仄仄句,中仄仄平平韵。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">中仄仄平中仄句,中平中仄平平韵。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">中中中中中中仄句,中中中中仄中平韵。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">此诗要求每联对仗,写作时有一定的难度,在学习写作的过程中得到了恩师文凯大姐的热心帮助和指导,在此特表深深的谢意!</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>文字创作:思琪奶</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">图片制作:思祺奶</span></p>