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<p class="ql-block">出句:一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">出句:浅夏微凉</p><p class="ql-block">点评:浅夏微凉</p><p class="ql-block">美编:浅夏微凉</p> <p class="ql-block">前言: 在中国传统文化中“竹”“梅”和“松”被称为“岁寒三友”,历来为文人墨客所称道。</p><p class="ql-block">特别是“竹”和“梅”,似乎更受文人雅士的“青睐”。如苏东坡曾说:“宁可食无肉,不可居无竹”。他一生多次遭贬,流落多地。但不管走到哪里,苏东坡都会在自己住宅的周边种上竹子和梅花,以竹子和梅花的品性自喻。</p><p class="ql-block">现代生活节奏快,许多人在闲暇之余也会培养些雅好,莳花弄草,逗猫遛狗皆便是其一。本人出此上联:“一竹一梅皆室友”,借以表达对“竹”、“梅”品质的仰慕与赞美。</p><p class="ql-block">现就对句的切入点和句法作如下建议:</p><p class="ql-block">出句属于室内场景,且闲适,对下联的切入点,可借景抒情,可句中自对,下联可以不对数词,句中自对需规则重字,意境最好拓开,如室友也有“朋友”,“知音”之意,最好从其他角度着手会更佳。</p> <p class="ql-block">(客串作品)</p><p class="ql-block">3.贾保宁</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">半耕半读是家风。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">65.流星</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">无名无利是吾心。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">84.南星河&nbsp;UFO</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">好书好画亦师尊。</p> <p class="ql-block">(三甲)</p><p class="ql-block">14.天涯弹月</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">有花有鸟作书僮。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(237, 35, 8);">简评:自对手法赞,对句格调高雅,养梅种竹,观花遛鸟,以竹梅为室友,花鸟做书僮,文人雅趣尽表其中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">75.丙辰</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">无诗无酒不人生。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(237, 35, 8);">简评:在古代文人那里,有酒必有诗,无诗酒不雅,无酒诗不神,酒能激发诗人的创作灵感,诗能增添饮酒的高雅情调,酒和诗彼此依托,相互映衬。生活需要调剂品,李白、陶渊明为典型代表。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7.老头</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">半醒半醉比诗仙。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(237, 35, 8);">简评:同样是自对手法出彩,半醒半醉日复日,花落花开年复年。但愿老死花酒间,不愿鞠躬车马前。有唐寅《桃花庵歌》的意境。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">(三优)</p><p class="ql-block">63.竹溪</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">半山半水足诗材。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(237, 35, 8);">简评:山山水水皆有诗情画意,放怀此间,足够为雅趣提供丰富的诗材,对句遣词优美,意境开阔,炼字精粹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">57.张友祥</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">毫名毫利尽禅关。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(237, 35, 8);">简评:禅关: 比喻悟彻佛教教义必须越过的关口。 指入佛门修道者。通过以修道者的角度,切入名利的影响力,对句蕴涵警示哲理。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">42.笨笨熊</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">千文千字亦心声。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(237, 35, 8);">简评:有些文字,是需要带着阅历去品味,没有经历就很难读懂其中的深意,所谓,心近者,可以相通,文字会滋养两种人,写它的人和读懂它的人 。养心入眸的文字,是朵永不褪色的心香。对句情真意切,引发共鸣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">(入围)</p><p class="ql-block">68.山鬼谣</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">此山此月乃邻居。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(237, 35, 8);">简评:以竹梅为友,同山月作邻,轻描淡写间暗藏雅怀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">5.百里之才</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">千桃千李尽门生。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(237, 35, 8);">简评:竹梅为友,桃李为门生,师者形象跃然纸上。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">1.曙光</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">千词千赋尽良师。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(237, 35, 8);">简评:师者传道解惑也,畅游在文学作品中,心灵会受到新的洗礼,又如师者指引我们前行,对句工整,中规中矩。</span></p> <p class="ql-block">1.曙光</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">千词千赋尽良师。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">2.林耀東</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">满庭满院尽书香。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">3.贾保宁</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">半耕半读是家风。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">4.米</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">残花残叶别秋风。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">5.百里之才</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">千桃千李尽门生。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">6.厚德载福</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">亦真亦幻尽乡愁。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7.老头</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">半醒半醉比诗仙。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">8.边马</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">双兰双菊是门童。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">9.股砺人生</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友</p><p class="ql-block">片花片叶尽诗材</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(237, 35, 8);">简评:无标点符号。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">10.小英</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">千山千水尽乡情。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">11.荷叶</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">半山半窗又诗情。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">12.天地一沙鸥</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友</p><p class="ql-block">众松众柏尽家师</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">13.亦学</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">佳诗佳画尽庭辉。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">14.天涯弹月</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">有花有鸟作书僮。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">15.鞠良</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">三生三世有缘人。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">16.种豆南山下</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">三春三径尽家怀。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">17.阿胜</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">六经六史等吾师。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">18.(语)不惊人自芬芳</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">每朝每夕作良朋。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">19.沧海飞鸿</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">半山半水乃知音。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">20.迟来的温馨</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">半书半画俱诗魂。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">21..秃垂叟</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">五湖四海乃家人。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">22.城步·段文华</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友</p><p class="ql-block">半醒半醉俱骚人</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">23.高风亮杰</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">有鹅有鹤做伴郎。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">24.深谷幽兰</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">能文能武好门风。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">25.高继林</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">傍山傍水共篱花。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">26.诗人搁笔</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">半丝半缕亦家什。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">27.拂晓</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">无情无欲尽禅心。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">28.安娜老爸</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">霜风霜雪亦严师。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">29.微明</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">半梦半醒似神仙。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">30.星星知我心</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">时茶时酒是诗朋。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">31.游于艺(四维鸿)</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">半痴半俗总冰清。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">32.高歌追梦孙宝山</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">满箱满柜尽联书。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">33.娄东客</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">双飞双宿是鸳鸯。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">34.泪中鱼</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">满房满院尽闲人。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">35.Rain</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">三余三上惜光阴。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">36.心中有爱</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">无嗔无怨是高人。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">37.潇湘游子</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">千峰千谷乃人生。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">38.张春民</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">两湾两岸俱同胞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">39.范洪浴</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">千花千叶尽门徒。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">40.李雨桦</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">三生三世似天仙。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">41.欢喜就好</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">时书时画即人生。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">42.笨笨熊</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">千文千字亦心声。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">43.我对香烟变了心</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">百态千姿尽显骄。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">44.LAI_巡山</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">满心满眼尽华篇。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">45.如宝江山</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">孤琴孤鹤是知音。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">46.快乐鸟</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">千山千水尽亲朋。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">47.温暖的光</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">千山千水是诗情。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">48.杨梅水中人</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">有风有月乃同行。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">49.邓泽贤13925826162</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">朝经暮史即门师。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">50.易秀锋</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">千言千语尽衷肠。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">51.轉🇨🇳運</p><p class="ql-block">出句:&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">对句:&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;利国利民尽心声。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">52.顺风🇨🇳</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友</p><p class="ql-block">多才多艺共芬芳</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">53.郭廷英</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">有山有水好风光。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">54.一滴水</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">千江千月尽诗情。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">55.天海云帆</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">千诗千画亦心声。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">56.诚信</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">共甘共苦又同心。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">57.张友祥</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">毫名毫利尽禅关。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">58.寻找心灵家园</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">有琴有酒共知音。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">59.张立军</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">半耕半读乐平生。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">60.孔德光</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">双春双月是流年</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">61.仰望星空</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">有情有爱是夫妻。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">62.惠风</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">千人千面觅知音。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">63.竹溪</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">半山半水足诗材。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">64.旗开得胜</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">双行双韵尽诗情。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">65.流星</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">无名无利是吾心。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">66.晴日雨</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">三山五岳尽同源。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">67.逊雪输梅</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">吟风吟月蕴诗情。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">68.山鬼谣</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">此山此月乃邻居。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">69.伟记莲藕18475106783</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">虚心傲骨是先生。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">70.感悟</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">荷衣蕙带远尘心。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">71.王双玲</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">同心同德做高邻。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">72.霞</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">无花无酒不诗仙。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">73.秋水</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">三江三水乃村名。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">74.竹风</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">有诗有酒度余年。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">75.丙辰</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">无诗无酒不人生。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">76.竹风</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">半痴半醒是人生</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">77.寻找心灵家园</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">乐山乐水度平生。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">78.果然</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">单弦单曲袅余音。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">79.馳鵬</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">无忧无虑度余生。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">80.诚信</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">无欲无求难成人。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">81.明天会更好</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">有情有意才弟兄。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">82.霜叶</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">我行我素任痴狂。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">83.风和日丽</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">天光草色乃诗情。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">84.南星河&nbsp;UFO</p><p class="ql-block">一竹一梅皆室友;</p><p class="ql-block">好书好画亦师尊。</p>