<p class="ql-block">摄影／大自然srj</p><p class="ql-block">诗歌／《当你老了》</p><p class="ql-block">作者／威廉·巴特勒·叶芝</p><p class="ql-block">出品／华为影业出品</p><p class="ql-block">音乐／《当你老了》</p><p class="ql-block">演唱／莫文蔚</p><p class="ql-block">编辑／大自然srj</p> <p class="ql-block"> 有人用汉语翻译了一首英文诗，全世界都服了！在这个人人学英语的时代，大家似乎都快忘了，我们的汉语有多美多强大！</p><p class="ql-block"> “多少人曾爱慕你年轻时的容颜，可是谁能承受岁月无情的变迁”，爱尔兰诗人威廉·巴特勒·叶芝深情创作的《当你老了》叩响了无数人的心扉，其爱情故事让人非常感动，催人泪下。</p> <p class="ql-block"> 《当你老了》是威廉·巴特勒·叶芝于1893年创作的一首诗歌，是叶芝献给友人茅德·冈热烈而真挚的爱情诗篇。诗歌语言简明，但情感丰富真切。诗人采用了多种艺术表现手法。文章通过深入剖析诗作中诗人所使用的艺术表现手法，诸如假设想象、对比反衬、意象强调、象征升华，再现了诗人对茅德·冈忠贞不渝的爱恋之情。揭示了现实中的爱情和理想中的爱情之间不可弥合的距离。</p><p class="ql-block"> 今天我们来赏析这首外文诗翻译成中国古诗词，来看看她究竟有多美？</p> <p class="ql-block">【英文原文】</p><p class="ql-block">When you are old</p><p class="ql-block">--- William Butler Yeats</p><p class="ql-block">When you are old and grey and full of sleep，</p><p class="ql-block">And nodding by the fire, take down this book，</p><p class="ql-block">And slowly read，and dream of the soft look。</p><p class="ql-block">Your eyes had once，and of their shadows deep；</p><p class="ql-block">How many loved your moments of glad grace，</p><p class="ql-block">And loved your beauty with love false or true，</p><p class="ql-block">But one man loved the pilgrim Soul in you，</p><p class="ql-block">And loved the sorrows of your changing face；</p><p class="ql-block">And bending down beside the glowing bars，</p><p class="ql-block">Murmur，a little sadly，how Love fled。</p><p class="ql-block">And paced upon the mountains overhead，</p><p class="ql-block">And hid his face amid a crowd of stars。</p> <p class="ql-block">【唯美现代版】</p><p class="ql-block">当你老了，头白了，睡意昏沉，</p><p class="ql-block">炉火旁打盹，请取下这部诗歌，慢慢读，</p><p class="ql-block">回想你过去眼神的柔和，</p><p class="ql-block">回想它们昔日浓重的阴影；</p><p class="ql-block">多少人爱你青春欢畅的时辰，</p><p class="ql-block">爱慕你的美丽，假意或真心，</p><p class="ql-block">只有一个人爱你那朝圣者的灵魂，</p><p class="ql-block">爱你衰老了的脸上痛苦的皱纹；</p><p class="ql-block">垂下头来，在红光闪耀的炉子旁，</p><p class="ql-block">凄然地轻轻诉说那爱情的消逝，</p><p class="ql-block">在头顶的山上它缓缓踱着步子，</p><p class="ql-block">在一群星星中间隐藏着脸庞。</p> <p class="ql-block">【诗经版】</p><p class="ql-block">美人迟暮，鬓髪霜白；</p><p class="ql-block">盹寐炉畔，寂寞难耐；</p><p class="ql-block">取下此卷，细细读来；</p><p class="ql-block">梦里依稀，柔瞳绿黛。</p><p class="ql-block">多少公子，垂涎玉貌；</p><p class="ql-block">真情假意，恋汝媚娇；</p><p class="ql-block">唯有某君，不同时调；</p><p class="ql-block">爱汝心灵，易容衰老。</p><p class="ql-block">炽热炉边，俯身趋前；</p><p class="ql-block">戚戚诉说，悲情伤感；</p><p class="ql-block">逝去之爱，已步山巅；</p><p class="ql-block">众星之中，藏隐其颜。</p> <p class="ql-block">【古风版】</p><p class="ql-block">暮色染霜鬓，炉边欲眠寐，</p><p class="ql-block">寒夜暖炉旁，随手取诗卷，</p><p class="ql-block">缓目细读之，柔文软似梦，</p><p class="ql-block">回眸半生路，忆及深沉影；</p><p class="ql-block">世人皆爱君，倾城好颜色，</p><p class="ql-block">虚情或假意，难以辨别之，</p><p class="ql-block">唯有一良人，慕卿以真心，</p><p class="ql-block">光阴摧花容，真心永不变；</p><p class="ql-block">俯身半侧卧，回神壁炉边，</p><p class="ql-block">自言窃窃语，黯然情已逝，</p><p class="ql-block">孤魂游山林，思绪远万里，</p><p class="ql-block">举头观繁星，似望故人颜。</p> <p class="ql-block">【七言版】</p><p class="ql-block">美人迟暮云鬓白，盹寐炉畔孤难耐；</p><p class="ql-block">取下此卷细读来，梦萦柔瞳伴绿黛。</p><p class="ql-block">多少公子馋玉貌，真情假意恋媚娇；</p><p class="ql-block">唯有某君不同调，爱汝心灵及衰老。</p><p class="ql-block">炽热炉边身趋前，戚戚诉说悲百感；</p><p class="ql-block">逝去之爱步高山，繁星之中隐其颜。</p> <p class="ql-block">【宋词版】 </p><p class="ql-block">八声甘州·汝老时</p><p class="ql-block">惜红颜渐老少精神，白发继青丝。</p><p class="ql-block">只炉边倦坐，捧书细阅，不语魂驰。</p><p class="ql-block">美目当年顾盼，回首又低垂。 </p><p class="ql-block">多少轻肥客，争与相随。</p><p class="ql-block">或恋雪肤花貌，假真难分辨，唯我成痴。</p><p class="ql-block">念莲心似汝，憔悴也相宜。</p><p class="ql-block">语喃喃、低眉蜷膝，叹悠悠、雁字总难回。</p><p class="ql-block">山中隐、望繁星满，忍更相思。</p> <p class="ql-block">不知道这世界上是否还有第二种语言能像汉语这样，拥有如此美的韵律。</p><p class="ql-block">不是自夸，放眼望去，还有哪种语言可以做到。一首诗，五种形式，款款动人。</p><p class="ql-block">汉语能给人一种惊心动魄的美，因为它是积淀了五千年的中华民族的骄傲。</p> <p class="ql-block">附：诗作原文双语</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">《When you are old 》</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">-- William Butler Yeats</span></p><p class="ql-block">《当你老了》</p><p class="ql-block"> --威廉·巴特勒·叶芝</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">When you are old and grey and full of sleep, </p><p class="ql-block">当你老了，头发花白，睡意沉沉，</p><p class="ql-block">And nodding by the fire，take down this book, </p><p class="ql-block">倦坐在炉边，取下这本书来，</p><p class="ql-block">And slowly read,and dream of the soft look </p><p class="ql-block">慢慢读着，追梦当年的眼神</p><p class="ql-block">Your eyes had once,and of their shadows deep; </p><p class="ql-block">你那柔美的神采与深幽的晕影。</p><p class="ql-block">How many loved your moments of glad grace, </p><p class="ql-block">多少人爱过你昙花一现的身影，</p><p class="ql-block">And loved your beauty with love false or true, </p><p class="ql-block">爱过你的美貌，以虚伪或真情，</p><p class="ql-block">But one man loved the pilgrim Soul in you </p><p class="ql-block">惟独一人曾爱你那朝圣者的心，</p><p class="ql-block">And loved the sorrows of your changing face; </p><p class="ql-block">爱你哀戚的脸上岁月的留痕。</p><p class="ql-block">And bending down beside the glowing bars, </p><p class="ql-block">在炉罩边低眉弯腰，</p><p class="ql-block">Murmur,a little sadly,how Love fled </p><p class="ql-block">忧戚沉思，喃喃而语，</p><p class="ql-block">And paced upon the mountains overhead </p><p class="ql-block">爱情是怎样逝去，又怎样步上群山，</p><p class="ql-block">And hid his face amid a crowd of stars. </p><p class="ql-block">怎样在繁星之间藏住了脸。</p>