【丝雨征稿〈第三期〉•夏雨荷风弹作弦】,优秀征文合辑(二)

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<p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">文字编辑:冰点</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">部分图片:网络</p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">陌上的时光,总是流转无声;季节的更迭,亦是安静从容。绿肥红痩,雨打芭蕉,季节辗转成诗,我们已然成为浓情夏日的归人。</p><p class="ql-block"> —题记(C-J-G)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(57, 181, 74);">目录(作者已授权,按投稿先后顺序排列•内容节选):</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">1,君子兰《夏夜》</span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=299646640&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=59212846&uuid=908dc375e28eeb8fa330544b752cbdde&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=59212846&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=d64d55eccd885fbc9c6257e3f29ec0ab&um_rtc=a2c4b35498376781abb2cfe4496211f3" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">作者专栏链接</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">2,尘心映月 《夏风轻吹荷花》</span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=43752549&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=59212846&uuid=908dc375e28eeb8fa330544b752cbdde&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=59212846&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=d64d55eccd885fbc9c6257e3f29ec0ab&um_rtc=13dc4f9fa0b04ef401b158b227d047e9" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">作者专栏链接</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">3,包纲《清香莲花》</span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=13236507&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=59212846&uuid=908dc375e28eeb8fa330544b752cbdde&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=59212846&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=d64d55eccd885fbc9c6257e3f29ec0ab&um_rtc=3f86aa904648ef9cddbc6e3cf443064a" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">作者专栏链接</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">4,凌栎《花堤无限美,荷叶无穷碧》</span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=626982&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=59212846&uuid=908dc375e28eeb8fa330544b752cbdde&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=59212846&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=d64d55eccd885fbc9c6257e3f29ec0ab&um_rtc=b1143432af066512096af6b9fce39da0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">作者专栏链接</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">5,厚德载福《</span>夏景·荷韵》<a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=12646831&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=59212846&uuid=908dc375e28eeb8fa330544b752cbdde&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=59212846&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=d64d55eccd885fbc9c6257e3f29ec0ab&um_rtc=8f38435a16318939e01b74111b27e770" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">作者专栏链接</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">6,紫藤花开《偷得夏日一段闲》</span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=353050036&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=59212846&uuid=908dc375e28eeb8fa330544b752cbdde&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=59212846&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=d64d55eccd885fbc9c6257e3f29ec0ab&um_rtc=94d37ac8266066bd8c56f01bfacd918f" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">作者专栏链接</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">7,江上风清《荷香诗意漫桂湖》</span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=1107071&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=59212846&uuid=908dc375e28eeb8fa330544b752cbdde&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=59212846&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=d64d55eccd885fbc9c6257e3f29ec0ab&um_rtc=3008502eb0c69c89d2cdc1e21f5e9151" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">作者专栏链接</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">8,清溪《我终究活不成你喜欢的模样》</span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=59199534&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=59212846&uuid=908dc375e28eeb8fa330544b752cbdde&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=59212846&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=d64d55eccd885fbc9c6257e3f29ec0ab&um_rtc=8d21dcf35bd53bcc69eda9640a8f7dc6" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">作者专栏链接</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">《夏夜》</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">文/君子兰</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">雨过,天晴</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">仲夏,晚风习习</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">外婆的蒲扇歇了</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">清脆的蛙鸣又提亮了几分</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">蛙声尽管隆重</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">那会,它是不入耳的</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">那时的天最蓝,夜空最亮</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">明月孤悬,星宿灵动</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">今夜,外婆的魔法只施展天上</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><a href="https://www.meipian7.cn/4a7xfs9z?first_share_to=singlemessage&first_share_uid=59212846&from=singlemessage&share_depth=1&share_from=others&share_to=group_singlemessage&share_user_mpuuid=d64d55eccd885fbc9c6257e3f29ec0ab&user_id=59212846&utm_medium=meipian_android&uuid=908dc375e28eeb8fa330544b752cbdde" target="_blank">原文链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">点评:</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">原本平常的夏夜,在诗人笔下却是不同寻常。外婆的蒲扇歇了,却在天上施着魔法,那些古老的故事,那些神秘的童谣,再次于朦胧的夜色里被萤火虫点亮,点点荧光交织着星光,把深深的思念拉长,星语传递的依旧是爱的密码……</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">《夏风轻吹荷花》</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">文/尘心映月</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">清风明月荷花香</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">阿爸摇橹</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">阿哥深情歌唱</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">芦苇荡中惊起鸟儿飞翔</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">那儿时的时光</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">让人向往</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">没有忧愁和悲伤</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">童年的梦里</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">浸透着妈妈的微笑</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">还有那蛙声阵阵</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">满淀的荷香</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><a href="https://www.meipian8.cn/4a7ynrc1?share_from=others&share_to=group_singlemessage&user_id=59212846&uuid=908dc375e28eeb8fa330544b752cbdde&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=59212846&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=d64d55eccd885fbc9c6257e3f29ec0ab&from=singlemessage&first_share_to=singlemessage" target="_blank">原文链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">点评:</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">行行句句都是对荷香里过去时光的状怀,句句行行都是乡土乡情和乡愁怀念思念和感恩。此文叙说了人因情而生,情因人而美,阐述了人与事在记忆中相携相伴永恒存在的哲理。人在他乡,心系故乡,夏风吹过荷花依然香。生命不息,记忆不泯,情感不绝!点赞文笔,欣赏尘心映月老师制作精制,图文并茂的精彩佳作!</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"> ——风雨兼程</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">《清香莲花》</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">文/包纲</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">流水的音符在</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">荷杆间穿梭,荷塘上空回旋</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">伴随朗朗晴空,缕缕白云</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">莲花在阳光下的</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">笑容,妩媚娇俏</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">莲花在圆月初上的夜色</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">散发清幽的芳香</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><a href="https://www.meipian8.cn/4a8630tj?share_from=others&share_to=group_singlemessage&user_id=59212846&uuid=908dc375e28eeb8fa330544b752cbdde&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=59212846&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=d64d55eccd885fbc9c6257e3f29ec0ab&from=singlemessage&first_share_to=singlemessage" target="_blank">原文链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">点评:</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">一花一世界,一叶一菩提。一念清静,心似莲花开。文字静雅,心亦静雅,文字生香,魂灵生香!心若莲花,一尘不染,甚好!</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"> ——风雨兼程</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">《花堤无限美,荷叶无穷碧》</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">文/凌栎</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">你素面朝天,向水而生</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">残叶枯茎在风中的战栗</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">如琴弦上的余音直叩云霄</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">你山水之间的怀抱</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">满怀着结实的种子</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">如擎举着生命的火焰</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><a href="https://www.meipian8.cn/4a8hygme?share_from=others&share_to=group_singlemessage&user_id=59212846&uuid=908dc375e28eeb8fa330544b752cbdde&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=59212846&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=d64d55eccd885fbc9c6257e3f29ec0ab&from=singlemessage&first_share_to=singlemessage" target="_blank">原文链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">点评:</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">于炎炎夏日,静静品读诗文,眼前呈现出荷塘的清幽,莲的高洁,文字中传来荷香万缕,诗中的无限风景,是诗人亦是读者心中美的永恒。</p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">《夏景·荷韵》</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">文/厚德载福</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block">夏天荷香轻轻飘来,像穿着淡绿衣裳的小仙女飘过淡香。荷花上的露水明净可爱。似一股清泉潺潺流过,沁人心脾,直抒胸怀,引人共鸣,如股清流……</p><p class="ql-block">曲曲折折的荷塘上面,弥望的是田田的叶子。叶子出水很高,像亭亭的舞女的裙。一朵朵荷花,紧紧依偎着碧绿滚圆的荷叶,在轻柔的雨丝沐浴下,显得更加清秀、雅洁、妩媚、可爱了。</p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian7.cn/4a8g4ltz?first_share_to=singlemessage&first_share_uid=59212846&from=singlemessage&share_depth=1&share_from=others&share_to=group_singlemessage&share_user_mpuuid=d64d55eccd885fbc9c6257e3f29ec0ab&um_rtc=fb7e546e9015102ed8d1f24a3d302fcb&user_id=59212846&utm_medium=meipian_android&uuid=908dc375e28eeb8fa330544b752cbdde" target="_blank">原文链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">点评:</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">每逢夏季,荷塘中碧盘摇曳,粉荷亭亭玉立,像湖中沐浴的仙⼥,嫩蕊凝珠,⽽且清⾹阵阵。无风摆着pose,有风轻舞飞扬,风姿绰约,纤尘不染,一池莲花,满塘荷韵。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"> </p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">《偷得夏日一段闲》</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">文/紫藤花开</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">轻轻掀起桃林的珠帘,</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">曾落在案几上的“六月”,</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">已是半夏里的回忆。</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">满园的桃子已经成熟,</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">圆嘟嘟的撑破了外衣,</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">向我展现她们白里透红的脸蛋。</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">那阵阵的果香引诱我,</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">一步一步走到她们的中间,</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">摸摸这个好大,</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">尝尝那个好甜。</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">终于明白陶翁只羡桃园不羡仙的感叹!</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><a href="https://www.meipian8.cn/4a8tb5k9?share_from=others&share_to=group_singlemessage&user_id=59212846&uuid=908dc375e28eeb8fa330544b752cbdde&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=59212846&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=d64d55eccd885fbc9c6257e3f29ec0ab&um_rtc=3aececf8ac1e4f5060bd3715b3cb6417&from=singlemessage&first_share_to=singlemessage" target="_blank">原文链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">点评:</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">夏日,不仅仅有燥热,还有清风,绿野和果香,这半日的偷闲,有掀起桃林珠帘的惊喜,也有“仙女”摘桃的惬意,更感动于同行者的笑声和欢颜。偷闲太值得!</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"> </p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">《荷香诗意漫桂湖》</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">文/江上风清</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">近莲人亦香,</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">赏荷心犹洁。</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">诗意的风荷,</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">纤尘不染。</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">亘远的芬芳,</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">一瓣香传。</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">多想,</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">携一缕莲荷的清韵,</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">嵌入笔端,</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">执笔写意,</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">凝情为字。</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">将五百年的清纯高雅,</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">写在文心坦荡的情怀中,</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">留在荷香可人的记忆里。</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><a href="https://www.meipian8.cn/4acinsqj?share_from=others&share_to=group_singlemessage&user_id=59212846&uuid=908dc375e28eeb8fa330544b752cbdde&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=59212846&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=d64d55eccd885fbc9c6257e3f29ec0ab&um_rtc=324bc69e792c248035cf94c5c3347d04&from=singlemessage&first_share_to=singlemessage" target="_blank">原文链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">点评:</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">“一泓雅净,一点胭红,一片碧波滚滚。”开篇切题,把读者带到如画的荷塘美景之中,景中有诗,诗中有情。清风荷韵,芬芳漫散。蘸一塘莲的清韵,泼墨素色诗笺,印下荷香远溢的记忆。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"> </p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">《我终究活不成你喜欢的模样》</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">文/清溪</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">这又怎么样呢</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">我绽放在一方小小的池塘</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">没人来关注</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">也不用人关注</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">兀自盛开</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">兀自美丽</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">这是一幅有留白的画</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">这是一首孤独的诗</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><a href="https://www.meipian8.cn/4acrk2y0?share_from=others&share_to=group_singlemessage&user_id=59212846&uuid=908dc375e28eeb8fa330544b752cbdde&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=59212846&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=d64d55eccd885fbc9c6257e3f29ec0ab&um_rtc=61ec482b3b5cae8a4ba8cac0fe4faa79&from=singlemessage&first_share_to=singlemessage" target="_blank">原文链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">点评:</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">谁说我要活成你喜欢的样子?难道我的清秀,雅洁和美丽不是超凡脱俗的吗?诗人寓荷抒情,赞荷孤芳自赏,洁身自好,从荷的角度表达自己的思想,也达到赞荷的目的!双重意义,不同效果,精彩!</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block" 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