<p class="ql-block"><i style="font-size:22px;">《笔墨轩》楹联作业第（005）期</i></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">本周长/金禾秋韵</p><p class="ql-block">主审/味易</p><p class="ql-block">制刊/金禾秋韵</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7. 18日楹联作业</p><p class="ql-block"><i style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">上句 ：晓镜但愁云鬓改（李商隐）</i></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">下句：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">1.晚妆应恨夕阳留（淡烟细雨）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">2.春筵且喜玉杯倾（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">3.秋花更恨夕阳催(风铃度)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><i style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">4.夜灯常伴楚词吟（金禾）</i></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">5.夜船犹听玉箫鸣（梦天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><i style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">6.秋窗常怕暮雨敲（静水）</i></p><p class="ql-block">雨仄应平</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">改:夜窗又见雪花飘（静水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">7.秋堂又见月轮悬（梦天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">8春窗又见柳眉开(草莓)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">9春窗应觉泪光寒(草莓)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:18px;">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7.19楹联作业</p><p class="ql-block"><i style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">上句：岭树重遮千里目（柳宗元）</i></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">下句：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">1.江风已送五更帆（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block">重，浓重，形容词，原对是：江流曲似九回肠，曲，曲折，形容词；已副词，从宽了</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">2.风泉忽洗一时心（淡烟细雨）</span></p><p class="ql-block">见上，忽副词，从宽了</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">3.江帆已去九回肠（梦天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block">见上，已副词，从宽了</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">4.笛音唯诉万般愁（静水）</span></p><p class="ql-block">见上，唯副词，从宽了</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">5.羌笛曲诉九回肠(草莓)</span></p><p class="ql-block">见上，此曲有曲子之义，名词</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">6.峰峦又秀万千坊(草莓)</span></p><p class="ql-block">岭树偏正，峰峦并列。另见上，又副词，从宽了。上有千字</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">7.山花竞染满天霞(风铃度)</span></p><p class="ql-block">见上，竞动词，从宽了</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">8.江楼空见几颗星（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block">见上，空副词，从宽了</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7.20楹联作业</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">上句；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">疏松影落空坛静（ 韩羽）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">下句；</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">1.，薄雾阴垂曲径幽（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">2.野蓼香浮一沼幽(淡烟细雨）</span></p><p class="ql-block">一数目词，宜对数目词</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">3.瘦鹤声传深谷幽（静水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">4.野鹤声穿深谷宁(草莓)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">5.乱絮香迷陋室深(草莓)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">6.弱草珠悬细雨绵（静水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">7.瘦水声消野渡荒（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">8.残梦情留半月寒 (风铃度)</span></p><p class="ql-block">传统对句中“半”用作数目词</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">9.深谷溪流小洞幽（梦天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7.21楹联作业</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">上句：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">万里悲秋常作客（杜甫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">下句：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">1.孤窗澹月独思君（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">2.一行归雁共鸣霞(淡烟细雨）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">3.一宵高枕亦无忧（静水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">4.一声短笛又怀人（梦天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">5.三更绮梦又思亲（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">6.一帘幽梦忽还乡(风铃度) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">7.半堤高柳尽鸣蝉（梦天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block">万里悲秋应是深秋，而高柳尽鸣蝉应是盛夏，隔景了</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">改:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">半篱寒菊正飞鸿 （梦天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">8.无边苦雨更思乡（静水）</span></p><p class="ql-block">好</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">9.千帆碧海共乘风（梦天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block">碧颜色词，宜对颜色词</p><p class="ql-block">改:</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">千帆深海共乘风 （梦天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">半篱寒菊正飞鸿 （梦天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7.22楹联作业</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">上句：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">汉口夕阳斜渡鸟（刘长卿）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">下句：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">1.潇湘秋水远归舟 （金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">2.湘江秋雨近归渔（梦天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block">夕阳秋雨不谐。归渔牵强</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">3.长沙岳麓散流霞（草莓）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">4.潇湘橘苑横落花（草莓）</span></p><p class="ql-block">橫着怎会落下？</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">5.崂山萧寺远鸣钟（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">6.天涯客子暗思乡（静水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">7.灞桥春柳送离人(风铃度) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">8.香山枫叶醉流霞(风铃度) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">9.洞庭秋雨乱流波（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block">夕阳秋雨不谐</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">10.梁园烟柳乱鸣蝉（梦天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">11.家山秋草细吟蛩(风铃度) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">12.锦江春色醉游人(风铃度) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p>