<p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">试笔《阳关曲》之后</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:15px;">文/周 慎</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【</span><b style="font-size:20px;">原作</b><span style="font-size:20px;">】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">唐王维《渭城曲•送元二使安西》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渭城朝雨浥轻尘，客舍青青柳色新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君更尽一杯酒，西出阳关无故人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【</span><b style="font-size:20px;">释难</b><span style="font-size:20px;">】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">①《钦定词谱》收为《阳关曲》，如果作七绝解，此为折腰体。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">②首句平起平收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">③第2句第5字、第3句第7字，以用上声字为宜，宋以后亦有不遵者。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">④老街味道发现第三句都用了锦鲤翻波，亦有同感。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">⑤第3句和第4句例用流水句。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【</span><b style="font-size:20px;">试笔</b><span style="font-size:20px;">】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">1.阳关曲•千缕幽香迷蝶蜂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夏来迎得日红彤。花色夭夭蕴暖融。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">有谁惹得满天舞，千缕幽香迷蝶蜂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2.阳关曲•还是清零谋虑长</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">疫邪为患逞凶殃。人世凄凄躺也伤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一番变异一番苦，还是清零谋虑长。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">3.阳关曲•暑游高椅岭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暑来高椅映红晖。梯路遥遥势也巍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老天亦悯旅人苦，先洒甘霖除敝颓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">4.阳关曲•前日繁花还有无</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">半宵风雨闹村庐。滴哒连连染湿濡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翌晨稚子最先问，前日繁花还有无。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">5.阳关曲•谁谓星河无钓人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夙知天路也多尘。莫怪长征碧海巡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">太空振臂道清遍，谁谓星河无钓人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">6.阳关曲•余谓心安才是家</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">楚天中夏映朝霞。高铁迢迢走海涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">世间但觉转蓬苦，余谓心安才是家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">7.阳关曲•微信闲聊情意深</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">手机连网似亲临。千里迢迢一片心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜阑寂静视频响，微信闲聊情意深。</span></p>