<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">特别声明：【加强连】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">附：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.epian.vip/mp/46epkghc?share_from=self" target="_blank" style="font-size:20px;">【加强连】联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">5月23日出句：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风在侧吟诗稳 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹 </span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">精彩呈现：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>春风在侧吟诗稳 (恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">旭日当空作赋舒 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲 (恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">战兵永日不归田 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹 (恋恋风尘）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一郊城垒忆芳踪 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风在侧吟诗稳(恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野色当前入画奇(杨柳岸)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲(恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">戍楼一梦暂还乡(杨柳岸)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹(恋恋风尘）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一帘烟雨隐前情(杨柳岸)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风在侧吟诗稳(恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">丽日居中近午闲（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲(恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恺风历古总亲民（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹(恋恋风尘）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一方砚玺享平生（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风在侧吟诗稳(恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">明月居中敲子闲(乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹(恋恋风尘）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川花草换新颜(乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲(恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蓬蒿满地弃耕田(乡间晚风)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风在侧吟诗稳(恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟾月当头把酒欢（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲(恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">边关近暮不归田（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹(恋恋风尘）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一程云水引新愁（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风在侧吟诗稳 (恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">细柳垂前哼曲闲（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲 (恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">炊烟遍野尽离乡（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹 (恋恋风尘）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">几番茶酒忆陈年（文心）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹(恋恋风尘）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三更霜月惹新愁(钱云金雨)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风在侧吟诗稳(恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">细雨斜前对酒频(钱云金雨)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲(恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">角声彻夜忘修书(钱云金雨)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹 (恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">满园桃李展新颜 (於发)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲 (恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">边关何日不横戈 (於发)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风在侧吟诗稳 (恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晓日当空入画幽 (於发)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹(恋恋风尘）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三春花鸟问新人(洗书阁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风在侧吟诗稳(恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">青犊迎前弄笛斜(洗书阁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲(恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">家人何日可团圆(洗书阁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风在侧吟诗稳 (恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">明月入怀醉酒沉（绿水无忧）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲 (恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云烟过往独思乡（绿水无忧）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹 (恋恋风尘）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一庭烟雨散前尘（绿水无忧）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风在侧吟诗稳 (恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暮日横江作画悠（七弦琴）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲 (恋恋风尘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">狼烟终日怎归乡（七弦琴）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹 (恋恋风尘）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">半生烟雨入新词（七弦琴）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风在侧吟诗稳（恋恋风尘）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉竹临窗泼墨频（长安山石）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲（恋恋风尘）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">刀丛终日不归乡（长安山石）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹（恋恋风尘）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一江云水赋新词（长安山石）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹(恋恋风尘）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">一林梅竹绘新图(秋实) </span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">春风在侧吟诗稳(恋恋风尘)</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">晴日当空摄影悠(秋实) </span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">烽火经年难解甲(恋恋风尘)</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">河山万里不藏弓(秋实)</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">简评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">出句一：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风在侧吟诗稳 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抒情联，平平仄仄平平仄句式。身旁春风围绕，借着春风的熏染，“我”感觉作诗都工稳了许多。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">吟诗：即作诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">稳：此处指工稳。有 “古贤用志苦，吟诗一字稳”之句。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风在侧吟诗稳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟾月当头把酒欢~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">借一缕春风，一轮明月；把酒言欢，联诗月下，该是何等惬意，好句！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风在侧吟诗稳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">明月居中敲子闲~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风邀明月，吟诗兼下棋；如此雅兴，岂不快哉！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">敲子：指下棋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风在侧吟诗稳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野色当前入画奇~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风相伴作诗都显得工稳了；面对旖旎春光，画笔自然也添了无限想象。“奇”字用的出彩，好联！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">除此之外，联友们的佳句多多，恕不一一列举。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">出句二：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">叙事抒情联，仄仄平平平仄仄句式。多年战火不断，身上的战甲迟迟不能卸去。出句表达了战争所带来的一种无奈与感叹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">经年：指经过一年或若干年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">边关近暮不归田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">多年战火不断，人近暮年还未卸下铠甲。而“不归田”三字又是何其坚定！可谓是不破楼兰誓不还！整个联对从“难解甲、近暮、不归田”几个词组中情感交织，步步推进，读罢尤其震撼心灵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">战兵永日不归田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">通过断句可以看出此联也是词工意美的佳联；尾三字也是不归田，与上面一联异曲同工，不再赘诉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">戍楼一梦暂还乡</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">难解甲是实，暂还乡是虚；此联以虚实相对含蓄蕴藉，耐人咀嚼。使情感更加丰富强烈！如此一梦，个中滋味，不言而喻！真是奇思妙联，学习！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">佳句略举：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烽火经年难解甲 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">边关何日不横戈~~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">角声彻夜忘修书~~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">家人何日可团圆~~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云烟过往独思乡~~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">河山万里不藏弓~~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">出句三：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">叙事抒情联，隐藏了主语“我”。仄仄平平平仄仄句式。我漫步在山间，沿着溪水和青山走了很远，欲找回昔日的些许印记。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">溪山：指溪流与青山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里：量词，这里指走了很远的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一郊城垒忆芳踪~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寻旧迹，忆芳踪；不思量，自难忘！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三春花鸟问新人~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">时隔三春，花鸟成了主人，我已然成了客；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">几番茶酒忆陈年~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欲买桂花同载酒，终不似，少年游！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川花草换新颜~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">“换新颜” 怕是不见了当时面貌，尤添愁绪！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里溪山寻旧迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一程云水引新愁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故地重游，一路风景却会添愁；其中原因想必只有自己知道，结的含蓄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正！🌹🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">指导：芳草</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">简评：七弦琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">审阅：芳草、杨柳岸、朱简、云朵、牧羊人、文心、乡间晚风、笛里关山、七弦琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">组稿：笛里关山、杨柳岸、闲云、乡间晚风、云朵、文心、钱云金雨、於发、洗书阁、绿水无忧、七弦琴、长安山石、秋实</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">（排名依投稿顺序）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">编录：七弦琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">(1) 所有对句均属原创</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">(2) 图片来自网络 致谢</span></p> ☆☆☆