【加强连】联对集锦（一百四十五）

七弦琴

<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">特别声明：【加强连】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">附：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.epian.vip/mp/46epkghc?share_from=self" target="_blank" style="font-size:20px;">【加强连】联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">5.13 出句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">些些往事藏杯底 (风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举杯未饮三分醉 (风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">楼台一角悬秋月 (风)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">精彩呈现：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">些些往事藏杯底 (风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">片片丹心寄剑锋 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举杯未饮三分醉 (风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">策马将驰八面威 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">楼台一角悬秋月 (风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">原野四方起鲤风 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">些些往事藏杯底(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">缕缕闲愁入句中(云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举杯未饮三分醉(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">纵笔难书万缕愁(云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">楼台一角悬秋月(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">洲渚四围息雁声(云朵）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">些些往事藏杯底(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜夜故人入梦中(乡间晚风）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举杯未饮三分醉(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">卧榻无眠几度愁(乡间晚风）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">楼台一角悬秋月(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭院四周飞夜萤(乡间晚风）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">些些往事藏杯底 (风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">缕缕相思入梦中 (於发)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举杯未饮三分醉 (风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开卷长吟八股文 (於发)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">楼台一角悬秋月 (风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">城阙千峰落暮云 (於发)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">些些往事藏杯底(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">句句誓言浮眼前(洗书阁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举杯未饮三分醉(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">邀月先闻七里香(洗书阁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">楼台一角悬秋月(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">墨客三潭泛夜舟(洗书阁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">些些往事藏杯底 (风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">点点柔情寄笔端（绿水无忧）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举杯未饮三分醉 (风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">提笔欲描一缕香（绿水无忧）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">楼台一角悬秋月 (风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭榭半边蔽冷风（绿水无忧）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">些些往事藏杯底(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">句句哲言入典中（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举杯未饮三分醉(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">横笛已吹一曲欢（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">楼台一角悬秋月(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">菊桂满园沐晚风（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">些些往事藏杯底(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每每愁时泣烛前(月影清风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举杯未饮三分醉(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">望月又添两鬓愁(月影清风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">楼台一角悬秋月(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹菊几枝沐晚风(月影清风)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">些些往事藏杯底（风）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">缕缕旧情凝笔端（长安山石）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举杯未饮三分醉（风）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">引酒无言半世情（长安山石）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">楼台一角悬秋月（风）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭榭半池映菊花（长安山石）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">些些往事藏杯底 (风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">淡淡情思葬岭头（七弦琴）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举杯未饮三分醉 (风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伏案偶思半句痴（七弦琴）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">楼台一角悬秋月 (风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">阆苑半潭锁桂花（七弦琴）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">楼台一角悬秋月(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草木满山披夜霜(钱云金雨)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">些些往事藏杯底(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">片片浮云过眼前(钱云金雨)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举杯未饮三分醉(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">落笔难书两地情(钱云金雨)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">些些往事藏杯底(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曲曲情歌荡耳边(秋实) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举杯未饮三分醉(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">离席轻弹一曲愁(秋实) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">楼台一角悬秋月(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闺阁孤窗闻笛声(秋实)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">些些往事藏杯底(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">缕缕流光漏指间(杨柳岸)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举杯未饮三分醉(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">炼句新炊一味闲(杨柳岸)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">楼台一角悬秋月(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霄汉三更渡楚鸿(杨柳岸)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">些些往事藏杯底(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">汩汩清流逝谷旁（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举杯未饮三分醉(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">持稿将投一片蒙（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>楼台一角悬秋月(风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寰宇千峰染夜霜（闲云）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">简评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">出句一：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">些些往事藏杯底 </span><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">格律：平平仄仄平平仄句式。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">出句叙事抒情联，隐藏主语人（我）。 韶华易逝，岁月如歌，世事就如同一场大梦，而且不是所有的事都能与人诉说，只能默默地隐藏在心（杯）里。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">些些：这里以量词和形容词双解。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">佳句略举：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:20px;">些些往事藏杯底 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">点点柔情寄笔端</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">缕缕闲愁入句中</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">片片丹心寄剑锋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曲曲情歌荡耳边</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">缕缕相思入梦中</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">缕缕流光漏指间</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">句句哲言入典中</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">缕缕旧情凝笔端</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">出句二：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">举杯未饮三分醉 </span><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">格律：为平平仄仄平平仄句式。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">叙事抒情联，句意明朗，隐藏了主语我。出句没有时间的限制，出句大意是（我）端起了酒杯，还没喝就已经有了三分醉意。杯盏满斟，酒未入唇心已醉，至于因何而醉就该留给下联了。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">举杯未饮三分醉 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">纵笔难书万缕愁（心有千千结）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">邀月先闻七里香（联诗月下，对酒当歌吧）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">望月又添两鬓愁（举头望明月，低头思故乡啊）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">策马将驰八面威 （豪气，胸中自有万千丘壑）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">卧榻无眠几度愁（对仗工整）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">持稿将投一片蒙（生动、形象）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">出句三：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">楼台一角悬秋月 </span><span style="font-size:20px;">格律：平平仄仄平平仄句式。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">景物联， 出句 “楼台” 即点明了地点，“秋月”点明季节与时间，“一角”二字生动形象使句子活了起来。句意为秋季的晚上，一轮明月高悬于楼台的一个角落。 出句画面感强烈，句意唯美，对句时只要选择秋季的夜景即可。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:20px;">引用云朵老师的话：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:20px;">楼台：名词性并列词组，楼台亭榭都是指建筑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">景物联以同框为佳，出句看似简单，实际上佳对并不多。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">楼台一角悬秋月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">洲渚四围息燕声~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霄汉三更渡楚鸿~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭榭半池映菊花~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭院四周飞夜莺~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">菊桂满园沐晚风~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 诗词联的艺术鉴赏本无定论，以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正！🌹🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">指导：芳草</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">简评：七弦琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">审阅：芳草、杨柳岸、朱简、云朵、牧羊人、文心、乡间晚风、笛里关山、七弦琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">组稿：笛里关山、云朵、乡间晚风、於发、洗书阁、绿水无忧、文心、月影清风、长安山石、七弦琴、钱云金雨、秋实、杨柳岸、闲云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">（排名依投稿顺序）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">编录：七弦琴</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">(1) 对句均属原创</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">(2) 图片来自网络 致谢</span></p> ☆☆☆