<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">特别声明：【加强连】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">附：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.epian.vip/mp/46epkghc?share_from=self" target="_blank" style="font-size:20px;">【加强连】联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">5月4日出句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕剪东风花渐好(碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读书不殆残更尽(碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幸有闲心聊问句(碧云)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">精彩呈现：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕剪东风花渐好（碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">天施舜雨麦新肥(杨柳岸)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读书不殆残更尽（碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">耕野无劳湛露晞(杨柳岸)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幸有闲心聊问句（碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">空余逸兴独参禅(杨柳岸)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕剪东风花渐好（碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莺歌春日柳初新（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读书不殆残更尽（碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">听曲犹痴曙角鸣（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幸有闲心聊问句（碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">惜无妙笔可生花（云朵）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕剪东风花渐好（碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛙歌春水月初高（乡间晚风）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读书不殆残更尽（碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">织布无闲冷月沉（乡间晚风）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幸有闲心聊问句（碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">更兼美酒可消愁（乡间晚风）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕剪东风花渐好（碧云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莺梭岸柳叶初新（长安山石）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读书不殆残更尽（碧云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">泼墨笃勤淡月沉（长安山石）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幸有闲心聊问句（碧云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恨无良友共填词（长安山石）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕剪东风花渐好(碧雲)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莺穿柳浪草新苏（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幸有闲心聊问句(碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恨无雅意且端杯（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读书不殆残更尽(碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">对弈久思偃月沉（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕剪东风花渐好（碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莺啼暖日柳将新（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读书不殆残更尽（碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">索句难成炽火枯（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幸有闲心聊问句（碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">愧无美酒待来宾（闲云）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幸有闲心聊问句(碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不妨醉眼漫看云(钱云金雨)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕剪东风花渐好(碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莺啼晓雨叶初浓(钱云金雨)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读书不殆残更尽(碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">耕野无忧旧梦消(钱云金雨)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕剪东风花渐好 (碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莺梭南浦鸟空鸣 (於发)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读书不殆残更尽 (碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">作画还期景色新 (於发)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幸有闲心聊问句 (碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">愧无拙笔可涂鸦 (於发)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕剪东风花渐好(碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浇北圃笋犹肥(秋实) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幸有闲心聊问句(碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又思妙语可填词(秋实) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读书不殆残更尽(碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饮酒当随晓月休(秋实)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕剪东风花渐好 (碧云) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莺穿柳岸蝶初翩（七弦琴）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读书不殆残更尽 (碧云) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">索句何妨晚岁痴（七弦琴）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幸有闲心聊问句 (碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 愁无妙笔可成图（七弦琴）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕剪东风花渐好 (碧雲)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莺啼翠柳草忽荣 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幸有闲心聊问句 (碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欣生雅兴漫弹琴 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读书不殆残更尽 (碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">养性无休素日长 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕剪东风花渐好 (碧雲)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云裁细雨柳方舒（绿水无忧）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幸有闲心聊问句 (碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">惟存壮志可凌云（绿水无忧）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读书不殆残更尽 (碧云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学艺无涯晚漏迟（绿水无忧）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">简评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">出句一：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">燕剪东风花渐好，格律：仄仄平平平仄仄句式。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 出句景物联，“燕剪东风”点明时间是春季，东风即春风。燕子陶醉在春风里，因尾巴似剪刀所以说剪春风，燕剪属拟人修辞。因春天已到，所以春花渐好，含苞待放。出句前后因果逻辑合理，句意唯美。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:20px;">燕剪东风花渐好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">天施舜雨麦新肥</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕剪风，花待放；天施雨，麦更肥；俗话说春雨贵如油，一个“肥”字境界全出，下联前因后果合理，诗意唯美，好联。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舜雨：来自成语尧风舜雨，赞美尧舜德政，多指太平盛世。此处“舜雨” 理解为春雨，祥和之雨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">燕剪东风花渐好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">莺歌春日柳初新</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫燕醉春风，黄莺歌翠柳；上下联通过空间上的对比将一副春日美图尽收眼底了，春意盎然，引人遐想。“初”字用的好且合理，好联！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">燕剪东风花渐好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">莺啼翠柳草忽荣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">莺声婉转动听，翠（垂）柳成帘，花草争荣，使人感受着一派美好春日景象，心旷而神怡，亦属佳对。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">出句二：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读书不殆残更尽，格律：平平仄仄平平仄句式。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 出句抒情叙事联，隐藏主语，出句大意指（我）研读书籍直到天将破晓也不曾懈怠。说明了对学习知识有不断的探求欲望，孜孜不倦。愿所有衣带渐宽都可换来那寒灯下会心一笑，同时也说明了学无止境。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不殆：此处指不懈怠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">残更：即五更，说明天将破晓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">佳句略举：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:20px;">读书不殆残更尽（出）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">耕野无劳湛露晞（安于乡野，亦是繁华落尽，平淡归真的一种表现。湛露最早见于“诗经.小雅”）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">听曲犹痴曙角鸣（读书听曲，文人之雅兴）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">对弈久思偃月沉（久思月将沉，可观爱棋之深）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">作画还期景色新（心虽有画，何妨再添一点景色）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">耕野无忧旧梦消（青丝覆雪，旧梦难拾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">索句难成炽火枯（索句，承接了上联意境）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饮酒当随晓月休（ 好酒量！应该休息！）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">养性无休素日长（修身养性，未来可期）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学艺无涯晚漏迟（少时不知读书好，莫等青丝变白发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">出句三：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幸有闲心聊问句，格律：仄仄平平平仄仄句式，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 出句叙事联，句意明朗，隐藏了主语我。幸亏（庆幸）我还有闲情逸致暂且探索（讨）诗句，为何要用“幸有”，不然呢？这样就自然引申出了下联来。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">聊：可动副双解；副词指姑且、暂且之意</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问句：此处可看作探讨（研习）诗句之意</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:20px;">幸有闲心聊问句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">惜无妙笔可生花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">“惜无”反面入联；有闲情逸致探讨、研学诗句，却无奇思妙笔可赋佳篇，怎不可惜？ “惜无”关联词使用恰当，联内逻辑严谨，韵律和谐，当属佳对。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:20px;">幸有闲心聊问句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">更兼美酒可消愁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">“更兼”正面入联；有闲情逸致探讨、研学诗句，更何况还有美酒相左。诗酒相伴，什么忧愁也将烟消云散了，此联承接自然，犹如流水， 亦属佳对。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">限于篇幅，其它佳句不再一一列举，参考如下：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:20px;">幸有闲心聊问句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">空余逸兴独参禅~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">欣生雅兴漫弹琴~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">恨无良友共填词~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">又思妙语可填词~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">恨无雅意且端杯~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">愧无美酒待来宾~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 诗词联的艺术鉴赏本无定论，以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正！🌹🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>指导：芳草</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">简评：七弦琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">审阅：芳草、杨柳岸、朱简、云朵、牧羊人、文心、乡间晚风、笛里关山、七弦琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">组稿：杨柳岸、云朵、乡间晚风、长安山石、文心、闲云、钱云金雨、於发、秋实、七弦琴、笛里关山、绿水无忧</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">（排名依投稿顺序）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">编录：七弦琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">(1) 对句均属原创</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">(2) 图片来自网络 致谢</span></p> ☆☆☆