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五年级下册第四单元语文要素是尝试运用动作、语言、神态描写,表现人物内心,围绕这一要素,结合本单元课文中习得的方法,我帮助孩子们仔细剖析单元习作要求,深度解读习作示例“全神贯注”,运用思维导图的模式,从“语言”“神态”“动作”三方面模拟学写“妈妈生气时的样子”,帮助孩子们回忆生活,打开思路,并授之以渔:神态摄影法、动作慢镜头法、语言录音法,逐步建立习作支架。
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运用多种描写写清楚“生气、高兴、激动、伤心、后悔”等特点,点虽小,作用非常大,是本篇文章的重头戏,也是本单元语文要素中的重中之重。
再由提前已商讨好的各组执笔人执笔,完成习作思维导图核心步骤。
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习作框架建立起来后,就来到紧张而又激动的快速作文阶段了,各组围绕共同讨论的主题、情节、细节开始作文。一千个读者有一千个哈姆雷特,那么同篇作文思路,孩子们写出来的文章肯定也是千差万别、各具特色。
写好后,先自己修改,再在小组内部交换批阅。瞧,孩子们正在批阅组员的作文呢!
最后,小组之间两两结盟,互读作文,互评作文。一张张简单的自评互评单,写不完孩子们内心对他人习作的真实感受,道不尽自评互评中的满满收获。
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习作,于学生和教师而言,一个怕想,怕写,一个怕教,怕改。
通过多次习作评阅课的铺垫,和初次“同文异写”的尝试,孩子们对习作没有那么害怕了,甚至还有孩子说:“李老师,我好期待每单元的习作任务啊”。
通过搭建框架、指导方法、合作探究、自评互评、美文评比等方式,我也找到了习作教学的另一片天空。
当然,每次尝试,不是所有孩子都能受益,但只要对多半同学起效,努力就有意义。
习作教学,漫漫长路,步履维艰,静待花开。
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运用多种描写写清楚“生气、高兴、激动、伤心、后悔”等特点,点虽小,作用非常大,是本篇文章的重头戏,也是本单元语文要素中的重中之重。
再由提前已商讨好的各组执笔人执笔,完成习作思维导图核心步骤。
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习作框架建立起来后,就来到紧张而又激动的快速作文阶段了,各组围绕共同讨论的主题、情节、细节开始作文。一千个读者有一千个哈姆雷特,那么同篇作文思路,孩子们写出来的文章肯定也是千差万别、各具特色。
写好后,先自己修改,再在小组内部交换批阅。瞧,孩子们正在批阅组员的作文呢!
最后,小组之间两两结盟,互读作文,互评作文。一张张简单的自评互评单,写不完孩子们内心对他人习作的真实感受,道不尽自评互评中的满满收获。
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习作,于学生和教师而言,一个怕想,怕写,一个怕教,怕改。
通过多次习作评阅课的铺垫,和初次“同文异写”的尝试,孩子们对习作没有那么害怕了,甚至还有孩子说:“李老师,我好期待每单元的习作任务啊”。
通过搭建框架、指导方法、合作探究、自评互评、美文评比等方式,我也找到了习作教学的另一片天空。
当然,每次尝试,不是所有孩子都能受益,但只要对多半同学起效,努力就有意义。
习作教学,漫漫长路,步履维艰,静待花开。
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