<p class="ql-block"> 校长 ：陌上花开 </p><p class="ql-block">班主任：许琞 无忧花</p><p class="ql-block">评9团评阅团长：活色生香 </p><p class="ql-block"> 龙泉客 王琴杰</p><p class="ql-block">作管班长：雨夜伊人</p><p class="ql-block">练笔审稿：思雨 秋云</p><p class="ql-block">早读领读：王琴杰</p><p class="ql-block">早读统计：活色生香</p><p class="ql-block">机动人员：阳光普照</p><p class="ql-block">美篇制作：傻骨柔肠</p> <p class="ql-block">，渔洋第一法同题练笔。写七绝一首，题目《咏桃花》。</p><p class="ql-block">要求如下：</p><p class="ql-block">1、格律正确，首句入韵式。</p><p class="ql-block">2、起承句平铺直叙！</p><p class="ql-block">3、转句宕开一笔，用否定词转接，第四句要紧抱第三句做结。</p><p class="ql-block">4、限韵一东二冬。（平水韵用平韵）</p> <p class="ql-block">本期评阅：</p><p class="ql-block">容儿 老师</p><p class="ql-block">秋云 老师</p><p class="ql-block">许琞 老师</p><p class="ql-block">思语 老师</p><p class="ql-block">无忧花老师</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春日有约</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/雨夜伊人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晚秋送别约春逢，三月桃园小睡中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不见开颜心郁怅，折枝入室待花红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">小诗平起平收，平仄正确。押一东，用韵合理，小诗意境很好，想象丰富，转句用了转折词，符合渔洋第一法。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咏桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/思雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃林十亩已飘红，远近花魂意境丰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">灼灼夭夭看不厌，朝南独步至西东。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咏桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/活色生香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">竞绽妖娆泗水东，微波河面漾千红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">若无王母瑶池宴，岂让繁华乱逐风。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 咏桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文／潇潇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">灼灼华枝二月中，寒潮乍访鹿坪东。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">流光不与飞琼便，且拥夭桃沐巽风。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咏桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/许琞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小村昨日暖阳浓，布谷催耕似闹钟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不是春分时节到，桃花一夜满枝彤。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咏(雪中)桃花 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/画桥听雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">疑落琼花树树同，暗香拂过浣东风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">偏生不逊千层雪，独斗春寒一点红。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咏桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/无忧花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三月江南绿渐丰，开轩又见小桃红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">芳华灼灼藏不住，喜煞花间课蜜虫。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/柔肠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闻言桃李满枝红，每看蕾青酣梦中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三月若非多冷雨，芬芳香透眼前风。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咏桃花 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/玉良 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨露桃林逐渐红，香飘十里醉东风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春光不掩心间事，犹见金秋硕果丰。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/龙泉客</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">连天映目碧流东，沃野桃花已尽红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">游客若非多眷顾，仲春谁伴沐清风。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/月光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">池畔桃花绽放红，枝头黄鸟闹春风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">香飘莫叹随流水，影落清波十里同。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咏桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/云溪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陌上桃花树树红，清香淡淡暗随风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">若非二月芳菲色，怎见蜂飞蝶舞中。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咏桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/出水芙蓉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">瑶池仙子落桥东，蝶绣罗裙影弄风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">却遇春寒冰雹过，娇颜带泪满江红。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咏桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/林天平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春分季节百桃红，蝶舞蜂忙满树葱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不是朝霞晖大地，却将游客引花丛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">小诗平起平收，押一东韵，平仄正确，用韵合理。转句否定词转接，符合渔洋第一法。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咏桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/王琴杰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高架桥西水榭东，春光携韵倚微风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">花香到处无人叙，落笔随心画浅红。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咏桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/阳光普照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">众唱桃花三月红，冰天北国薄寒中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">芳菲不在窗前绕，却上心头与血融。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">（佳）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">.咏桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/雨纷飞 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">野桃一树画楼东，凝碧含朱体态丰，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">怎奈扶摇容不得，乱吹粉雪入眸中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">（注∶ 扶摇∶古代对风的雅称。）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/心如海</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">绿叶初萌戴朵红，琼枝摆舞暖春浓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">偏偏疫患接连出，只盼花园路启封。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 咏桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/一叶知秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">粉瓣芳馨沐暖风，夭姿蝶恋小桥东。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">飞花不尽随流水，岁岁繁华寓意丰。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咏桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/秋云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">绯云一片落溪东，春色撩情灿暖风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫道柴门崔护恋，夭桃粉面醉人红。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春日桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/时光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寻春独步旧园中，几树桃花映日红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">淡淡馨香关不住，引来蝶舞就东风。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咏桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/面朝大海</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">草长莺飞二月中，桃花陌上沐春风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幽香无尽游人醉，笑语声声响碧穹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">符合法度。但合句过于突兀。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 咏桃花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/月下老人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃树花开满院红，枝枝伸展斗妍同。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">偏生不让寒天在，笑傲江湖沐雨风。</span></p> <p class="ql-block">http://www.cishanshihui.com.cn/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=14853</p>