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“三月真暖,因为春光在外。三月真润,因为春雨欢快。三月灵动,因为春风摇摆。三月真好,因为遇见了你们。”三月二十五日,李凤工作室送教到第三协作区成员单位——涧池乡。来自第三协作区成员单位共三十余名小学语文青年教师参加了活动。
本次活动主题是“看图写话”,采用“课堂观摩、说课评课、教学重构、专题辅导”的形式进行。
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新课伊始,付老师设计了“课前游戏”——找不同的内容导入新课,有效激发了学生说的欲望。
她先出示两幅图片,让孩子们找不同。学生畅所欲言。很快找到了两幅图片的不同点。付老师顺势进行总结:“今天,我们将进行看图写话练习,也希望我们要用眼睛仔仔细细的看,用大脑积极的思考,用嘴巴完整的说。你们能做到吗?”
然后付老师回忆之前的看图写话方法:“你有什么写话的法宝呢?换句话说,拿到一幅图,你首先会干什么呢?“引导学生明白看图的方法:找时间、地点、人物、事件。
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(一)看一看,谁的眼睛亮。
1.什么时间,谁和谁?在哪儿?干什么?(指导学生按“四要素——时间,地点、人物、事件”的基本要求说几句完整、连贯的话。)
2.我们再来看看天气怎么样?(示形容天气好的词语:阳光明媚 万里无云 阳光灿烂 风和日丽 春风拂面 春暖花开,挑一个你喜欢的用上。学生练习说话:今天( )。
(二)说一说,谁的小嘴最棒
1.小朋友们都有一双善于发现美的眼睛!谁能把大家刚才说的连起来说一说?教师出示句式:(什么时候)到了,(天气怎么样)。(谁)和(谁)来到(哪里)(干什么)。(先自由练习,再指名说)
2.你种过树吗?(生分享种树过程)。回忆学过的课文《邓小平爷
3.要求学生用上(首先......接着......然后.......最后.......)表示先后顺序的词语来说一说图中人物植树的过程。爷植树》,请学生仿照课文的写法,说一说图中的人物是怎样植树的?
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大家说的都很棒!除了看图画内容,仿课文写法,我们还得想图画上没画的内容,比如:种完树后,他们的心情如何?(同桌互说,再指名说)
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现在难度升级,你敢挑战吗?请你根据老师给你的提示,把整幅图连起来说一说,注意了,如果你还能在老师给的提示语中加上自己的想法,那一定更棒!(学生分小组练习,推荐代表发言)
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老师发现,小朋友们不仅有双明亮的小眼睛,还有张能说会道的小嘴巴。老师想请小朋友们认真思考,把刚才看到的、想到的画面用几句话写下来,你们有信心吗?
出示写话要求:
1.开头空两格,正确使用标点符号。
2.书写工整,用合适的词语把句子写通顺。
3.学生练习写作。
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好的写话是修改出来的,请同学们把自己的写话读给同桌听,把读不通的句子改正过来,然后选择2至3篇优秀作品进行诵读。(重点表扬“表达规范或者有个性表达”的学生。)
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付老师问:“小朋友们,通过今天的看图写话练习,你学到了什么?”引导学生联系板书说自己的收获。
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工作室主持人在活动总结中对“写话”教学提出了两点建议,一要精准把握课标要求,着重培养学生写话兴趣和自信心,一是认真解读课标要求,二是认真解析教材每一次“写话”安排的要求,三是激发写话的兴趣,打开写话的大门。二要精心优化教学策略,为学生搭建写话的支架,一是拓宽写话的渠道,为学生搭建写话素材的支架,坚持依托文本,积累写话素材,深入生活,挖掘写话素材,开展活动,丰富写话素材,二是优化训练方式,为学生搭建写话练习的支架,做到先“说”后“写”,说写结合训练,引导观察,激发兴趣,创设情境,调动想象训练写话。
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本次活动主题是“看图写话”,采用“课堂观摩、说课评课、教学重构、专题辅导”的形式进行。
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新课伊始,付老师设计了“课前游戏”——找不同的内容导入新课,有效激发了学生说的欲望。
她先出示两幅图片,让孩子们找不同。学生畅所欲言。很快找到了两幅图片的不同点。付老师顺势进行总结:“今天,我们将进行看图写话练习,也希望我们要用眼睛仔仔细细的看,用大脑积极的思考,用嘴巴完整的说。你们能做到吗?”
然后付老师回忆之前的看图写话方法:“你有什么写话的法宝呢?换句话说,拿到一幅图,你首先会干什么呢?“引导学生明白看图的方法:找时间、地点、人物、事件。
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(一)看一看,谁的眼睛亮。
1.什么时间,谁和谁?在哪儿?干什么?(指导学生按“四要素——时间,地点、人物、事件”的基本要求说几句完整、连贯的话。)
2.我们再来看看天气怎么样?(示形容天气好的词语:阳光明媚 万里无云 阳光灿烂 风和日丽 春风拂面 春暖花开,挑一个你喜欢的用上。学生练习说话:今天( )。
(二)说一说,谁的小嘴最棒
1.小朋友们都有一双善于发现美的眼睛!谁能把大家刚才说的连起来说一说?教师出示句式:(什么时候)到了,(天气怎么样)。(谁)和(谁)来到(哪里)(干什么)。(先自由练习,再指名说)
2.你种过树吗?(生分享种树过程)。回忆学过的课文《邓小平爷
3.要求学生用上(首先......接着......然后.......最后.......)表示先后顺序的词语来说一说图中人物植树的过程。爷植树》,请学生仿照课文的写法,说一说图中的人物是怎样植树的?
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大家说的都很棒!除了看图画内容,仿课文写法,我们还得想图画上没画的内容,比如:种完树后,他们的心情如何?(同桌互说,再指名说)
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现在难度升级,你敢挑战吗?请你根据老师给你的提示,把整幅图连起来说一说,注意了,如果你还能在老师给的提示语中加上自己的想法,那一定更棒!(学生分小组练习,推荐代表发言)
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老师发现,小朋友们不仅有双明亮的小眼睛,还有张能说会道的小嘴巴。老师想请小朋友们认真思考,把刚才看到的、想到的画面用几句话写下来,你们有信心吗?
出示写话要求:
1.开头空两格,正确使用标点符号。
2.书写工整,用合适的词语把句子写通顺。
3.学生练习写作。
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好的写话是修改出来的,请同学们把自己的写话读给同桌听,把读不通的句子改正过来,然后选择2至3篇优秀作品进行诵读。(重点表扬“表达规范或者有个性表达”的学生。)
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付老师问:“小朋友们,通过今天的看图写话练习,你学到了什么?”引导学生联系板书说自己的收获。
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工作室主持人在活动总结中对“写话”教学提出了两点建议,一要精准把握课标要求,着重培养学生写话兴趣和自信心,一是认真解读课标要求,二是认真解析教材每一次“写话”安排的要求,三是激发写话的兴趣,打开写话的大门。二要精心优化教学策略,为学生搭建写话的支架,一是拓宽写话的渠道,为学生搭建写话素材的支架,坚持依托文本,积累写话素材,深入生活,挖掘写话素材,开展活动,丰富写话素材,二是优化训练方式,为学生搭建写话练习的支架,做到先“说”后“写”,说写结合训练,引导观察,激发兴趣,创设情境,调动想象训练写话。
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