<p class="ql-block">挑水宣传诗钟优选月集</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">评前语：</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">不知不觉，诗钟练习联评活动已满一月，因几个新社的创作需要有所提高，融入诗钟大团队中去，自2022.02.20日开始每日一题活动，由本人每日点评，从中选优，集优成篇，初涉点评，现将近一月优钟归队做集。本人水平有限点评难免不足之处，望各钟社钟友多提宝贵意见。得罪之处还请海涵包容，共同学习进步。合作愉快🌹❤️也祝每日一题越办越好，开心敲钟每一天。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"> 一一一一一挑水</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"> 2022.03.20</p><p class="ql-block">🌹🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">第一期优钟作品集：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗钟练习每日一题2022.03.03蝉联格“二月”</span></p><p class="ql-block">出题：挑水</p><p class="ql-block">简评：挑水</p><p class="ql-block">发布：挑水 宣传</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">A卷：响钟</p><p class="ql-block">A-：响钟微疵</p><p class="ql-block">B卷：病卷</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">响钟：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">10.一湾静水沉明月</p><p class="ql-block">二阵清风送彩霞</p><p class="ql-block">刘如风<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：通顺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">30.一刀劈碎潭中月，</p><p class="ql-block">二箭弹飞镜里星。</p><p class="ql-block">王会计<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：活泼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">39.一泓碧水浮春月，</p><p class="ql-block">二斗恒星耀玉霄。</p><p class="ql-block">梁洁<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">43.诗痴唱和耽无二，</p><p class="ql-block">月老姻缘引有双。</p><p class="ql-block">陈莪 <span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：好事成双</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">69.三人共赋巜瑶台月》</p><p class="ql-block">二友同迷巜锦帐春》</p><p class="ql-block">蹇开翠<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：词牌衔接不错</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">83.一牛总喘因慌月，</p><p class="ql-block">二虎常争为占山。</p><p class="ql-block">乡愁<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：工整</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.03.04魁斗格：“飞龙”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">响钟：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">3.飞刀刻活下山虎，</p><p class="ql-block">舞墨描灵出海龙。</p><p class="ql-block">王会计<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：好手艺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">32.龙头二月随春举，</p><p class="ql-block">雁翼三秋识候飞。</p><p class="ql-block">高峰<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：侯有酌余地</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">41.飞湍横泻疑藏鹤，</p><p class="ql-block">宝剑斜飞欲化龙。</p><p class="ql-block">张声文<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：妙，想像力丰富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">45.龙腾大海惊鱼散</p><p class="ql-block">虎啸深林吓鸟飞</p><p class="ql-block">简月<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：龙尊虎威</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">55.龙舟侧畔锣声急，</p><p class="ql-block">虎旆中间鼓影飞。</p><p class="ql-block">邹艳明<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：好一派激荡龙舟场面壮观</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.03.07鼎峙格：“桃花雨”（三字连线成等腰三角形即可，不分大小、倒正。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">响钟：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">16.花田野杏期春雨，</p><p class="ql-block">柳畔娇桃沐恺风。</p><p class="ql-block">白杨<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block">恺风：和风</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：畔有再酌空间</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">43.桃园春色逢甘雨，</p><p class="ql-block">竹地名花得暖风。</p><p class="ql-block">孙源<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：此花虚指可</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">诗钟练习女神节特别节目</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.03.08汤网格：“女儿情”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌头尾，直角三角形</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">响钟：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">17.恨莫亏心嘲瓦女，</p><p class="ql-block">情当慎意教璋儿。</p><p class="ql-block">周娜<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：儿女平等，传播正能量当赞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">35.女孝持家爹满意</p><p class="ql-block">儿忠报国母舒情</p><p class="ql-block">施赋<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：不错，舒有再斟余地</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">2022.03.09一唱：“梦安”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">响钟：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">12.安石风流贤相范，</p><p class="ql-block">梦溪谨敕后人师。</p><p class="ql-block">戴新<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block">注：安石 晋谢安 梦溪 宋郑若冲</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：为人表率当赞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">14.梦想悠闲凭警枕，</p><p class="ql-block">安知祸患起萧墙。</p><p class="ql-block">金玉芬<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：有忧患意识好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">29.安溪坐赏云舒卷</p><p class="ql-block">梦泽行吟月缺圆</p><p class="ql-block">邹艳明<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A</span></p><p class="ql-block">注：安溪，福建安溪县，梦泽，云梦泽，古有云梦二泽，今在洞庭湖一带）</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：好，化典无痕</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">33.安耽饭食扪心咽</p><p class="ql-block">梦寐金钱放胆花</p><p class="ql-block">肖致远<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：有梦想才会成功</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.03.10鸿爪格：“布谷歌”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不规则三角形</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">响钟：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">5.谷口布云松列阵，</p><p class="ql-block">桥头引水柳弹歌。</p><p class="ql-block">金玉芬<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：弹还有再酌空间</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">21.春芽布阵开新局，</p><p class="ql-block">秋谷收盘奏凯歌。</p><p class="ql-block">高洪斌<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：好，春华秋实，春播秋收，有理有据</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">2022.03.11一唱：“顺丰”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">响钟：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">2.顺利栽苗均旺盛，</p><p class="ql-block">丰收载谷满欢欣。</p><p class="ql-block">申国凤<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：不错，喜气洋洋跃然纸上</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">8. 丰湖粉面荷花艳，</p><p class="ql-block">顺岸青丝柳树柔。</p><p class="ql-block">袁桂杰<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：好，钟眼稳，丰湖地名在广东惠阳西。顺岸阳江市闸坡镇，都双关了</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">23.顺岁当为难日备</p><p class="ql-block">丰年应惜不时需</p><p class="ql-block">邹艳明<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：虽觉小合，但知珍惜，A—应推精神</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">31.丰饶沃土添诗意</p><p class="ql-block">顺美青山蕴画情</p><p class="ql-block">王丽<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：好，好山好水好风光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.03.16五唱：“迷惑”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">响钟：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">35.我佛开光迷眼净</p><p class="ql-block">仙人解梦惑心明</p><p class="ql-block">肖昌军<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：仙有再酌余地，此句胜在钟眼稳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">45.常耽酒色迷心脑</p><p class="ql-block">总醉花香惑眼眉</p><p class="ql-block">王丽<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：此句钟眼稳胜出</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.03.17鼎峙格：“花见羞”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">等腰三角形不分大小，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">响钟：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">14.疏林有见长生果；</p><p class="ql-block">羞草空遮百合花。</p><p class="ql-block">范围<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：长生果，百合花好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">16.武曌催花呈霸气，</p><p class="ql-block">阮孚羞槖见清风。</p><p class="ql-block">戴新<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：霸气清风皆人物品性</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">24.花容带笑逢春见</p><p class="ql-block">月色含羞入夜来</p><p class="ql-block">施赋<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：不错，唯妙唯肖如在眼前</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">25.园中约见书遮怯，</p><p class="ql-block">花下谈情袖掩羞。</p><p class="ql-block">陈国华<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：姿态不胜娇羞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">2022.03.18二唱：“风骨”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">响钟：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">33.荷风淡雅田园气，</p><p class="ql-block">柳骨轻柔山水图。</p><p class="ql-block">王富贵<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：不错，画面和谐雅致</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">37.梅骨生成霜雪怕</p><p class="ql-block">兰风蓄就水云惊</p><p class="ql-block">郎中<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：精神可嘉，惊可再斟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">38.梅骨横斜轻宠辱，</p><p class="ql-block">兰风浓淡惯沉浮。</p><p class="ql-block">邹艳明<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：刻画入微，淡然出尘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">41.清风醉月传幽韵，</p><p class="ql-block">傲骨迎春放暗香。</p><p class="ql-block">孙源<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：月下赏梅闻香，好雅兴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">43.傲骨过关歼六将</p><p class="ql-block">雄风临阵敌千军</p><p class="ql-block">施赋<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block">注：上，关羽，下，赵云</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：威武霸气的哥俩，不服不行，响钟吧</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.2.20勾股格：“水.庆.霞”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">响钟：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block">14.朝霞总映平安路</p><p class="ql-block">顺水常临吉庆家</p><p class="ql-block">赵喫喧<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：立意佳，美好心声正能量赞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">17.秋水文章堪庆羡，</p><p class="ql-block">晩霞画卷可珍藏。</p><p class="ql-block">谢谁杰<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：钟眼稳当</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">23.国庆泛舟惊水蔚</p><p class="ql-block">重阳登顶叹霞蒸</p><p class="ql-block">肖昌军<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：精神头足，旅途愉快</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022年第二期2202.02.21六唱：“冬奥”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">响钟：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">2.蝶舞冰场生奥美，</p><p class="ql-block">龙腾雪道战冬寒。</p><p class="ql-block">袁冰<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评；把冰雪场上运动员的洒爽英姿，高超技艺，奉献精神展现。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">2.瓦破卧能窥奥宇，</p><p class="ql-block">衣寒蜷可过冬天。</p><p class="ql-block">范围<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：人穷志不短，有理想有抱负，妥妥的正能量。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">4.空地滑冰赢奥趣，</p><p class="ql-block">寒天堆雪玩冬情。</p><p class="ql-block">丹心<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：把洒脱，轻松之气跃然呈现。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block">2022.02.23一唱：“全安”</p><p class="ql-block">响钟：</p><p class="ql-block">4.全意攻吴王濬勇，</p><p class="ql-block">安心保宋岳飞忠。</p><p class="ql-block">李兴富<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：英雄本色，踏实</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">6.全整山房三石立，</p><p class="ql-block">安熙市井四书藏。</p><p class="ql-block">范围<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：淡泊安静之气不错</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">10.全凭妙手丹青绘；</p><p class="ql-block">安得明心黑白分。</p><p class="ql-block">王志成<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：有理</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">20.全节不尝周室粟</p><p class="ql-block">安身已办范家船</p><p class="ql-block">穆之<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：忠贞与淡然并存，甚是安全</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">21.全无俗念风云淡，</p><p class="ql-block">安足生涯日月悠。</p><p class="ql-block">戴新<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：立意好，心胸开阔，很好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">25.安得灵丹除疾患</p><p class="ql-block">全凭浊酒长精神</p><p class="ql-block">张梅<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：人各有活法，开心就好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">27.安贫颜子居泥巷，</p><p class="ql-block">全节苏卿卧雪庭。</p><p class="ql-block">张声文<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：淡然自若非你莫属</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">30.安心生产收成好</p><p class="ql-block">全意经营待遇高</p><p class="ql-block">师傅<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：新颖，正能量</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.02.24碎锦格：“精彩无限”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">响钟：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">5.千载精神何有限</p><p class="ql-block">一时光彩自无多</p><p class="ql-block">穆之<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：一寸光阴一寸金，劝君莫惜金缕衣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">35有限春光添异彩，</p><p class="ql-block">无边野色隐精华。</p><p class="ql-block">孙源<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：春光无限美好时光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.02.25汤网格：“雨水酥”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">响钟：</span></p><p class="ql-block">2.雨润春山凝翡翠，</p><p class="ql-block">水流秋壑漾柔酥。</p><p class="ql-block">周建涛<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：水本无光，因画得彩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">16.水漫春江逢澍雨，</p><p class="ql-block">花开晓日捧琼酥。</p><p class="ql-block">张声文<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：春风春雨春花艳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">26.雨落窗前蕉叶翠，</p><p class="ql-block">水洇河岸柳心酥。</p><p class="ql-block">淡墨<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：不错，叶还有再酌余地</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.02.28鸿爪格：“小月光”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">响钟：</span></p><p class="ql-block">9. 院外横塘温月色</p><p class="ql-block">亭前小陌泄春光</p><p class="ql-block">巫瑞庭<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：好个泄春光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">10.钓月溪头闲小子；</p><p class="ql-block">追风光里老狂夫。</p><p class="ql-block">范围<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评：不错，悠闲自得</span></p><p class="ql-block">、</p><p class="ql-block">19.一棹闲情撩月色</p><p class="ql-block">三杯小酒醉春光</p><p class="ql-block">刘超<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：情酒对仗只能A-，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">但不这样又不A，下比有人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">24.小红有爱阳光送，</p><p class="ql-block">宝玉无知月色迷。</p><p class="ql-block">袁桂杰<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block">注:上比贾府落难之时小红</p><p class="ql-block">一直在默默的为凤姐奔走，</p><p class="ql-block">重情之人；下比宝玉的新娘被调包</p><p class="ql-block">还全然不知。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：还好，小红有见识有情有义知恩报恩当赞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">38.诗成小院秋光暗，</p><p class="ql-block">酒醒寒斋月色凉。</p><p class="ql-block">郎中<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：钟眼稳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.03.01碎锦格：“穷寇莫追”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">响钟：</span></p><p class="ql-block">8.图穷拔剑追无及，</p><p class="ql-block">寇至横戈志莫移。</p><p class="ql-block">张声文<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：勇往直前失志不移</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">15.人到穷时休作寇；</p><p class="ql-block">心追贵者莫为伥。</p><p class="ql-block">林仕坚<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：正能量赞一个，A-是我个人观点，就为志气可嘉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">18.流寇途穷当击鼓，</p><p class="ql-block">追兵势猛莫鸣金。</p><p class="ql-block">陈国华<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：乘胜追击一网打尽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.03.02鼎峙格：“春雷响”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">响钟：</span></p><p class="ql-block">5.夜起雷光嘶断续；</p><p class="ql-block">春来泉水响连环。</p><p class="ql-block">范围<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：形象</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">9.春来化雪千流响，</p><p class="ql-block">雨至惊雷万物酥。</p><p class="ql-block">袁桂杰<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：春风化雨千山翠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">18.雷声入夏非常响</p><p class="ql-block">地面回春的确潮</p><p class="ql-block">施赋<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：干脆利落，是该响</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">36.春花沐雨鸣虫响</p><p class="ql-block">野树惊雷宿鸟飞</p><p class="ql-block">刘超风<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">评：惊蛰了</span></p>