<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">联蕾争妍（7）收稿（20220310收稿）</p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">一、老师对句</b></p><p class="ql-block">1</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">素月平湖净客心。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">瀑溅珠飞琴瑟鸣。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光鹭岛，飞来千树雪；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。 （李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">2</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜，（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫气青髯过险关。（陈金清）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨打蕉吟凫渚听。（陈金清）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">儒生彭泽，笑迎三径菊；（陈金清）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">3</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">独鹤孤琴醉客心。（徐肇敏）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日落潮平舴艋回。（徐肇敏）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山妻机杼，织成五色锦；（徐肇敏）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">马卿汉赋，著称绝代祖；（徐肇敏）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">李国梁撰/罗春华书</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">二、联友对句</b></p><p class="ql-block">4</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">旧雨新元续玉章。（曾齐禄）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 水绕烟迷燕子归。（曾齐禄）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">牧童芝岭，横吹孤笛韵；（曾齐禄）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block">5</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">锦瑟华年苦旧情。（余秋兰）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁〉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨过天晴乳燕飞。（余秋兰）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画家石壁，绘摹千叠岭；（余秋兰）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block">6.</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠阁香茶约故人。（雪中）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡，（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日照花开布谷鸣。（雪中）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风竹径，铺匀三月草；（雪中）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">李国梁、付细娥联/徐肇敏书</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7.</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">陋室清茶待故人。（刘子荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁〉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月吻溪欢舴艋飞。（刘子荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">醉侯客舍，沽来千瓮酒；（刘子荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block">注：“客舍”指醉侯刘伶现今存世的作品《北芒客舍》。</p><p class="ql-block">8</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">碧树芳园沐晚风。（马玉太）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨润花开彩蝶飞。（马玉太）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风草径，吹开千树翠；（马玉太）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">9</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">黑水白山环紫云。（陈精）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">墨舞诗吟书院归。（陈精）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">才媛沙漠，迎来千古爱；（陈精）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">李国梁、林丽联/陈金清书</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">10</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白室青灯念故人。（罗宜疆）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日照云欢紫燕飞。（罗宜疆）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山僧屋舍，迎来三伏夏；（罗宜疆）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">11.</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">青瓦白墙思故园。（谢复兴）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雁过云飞队伍排。（谢复兴）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">樵夫山野，迎来三径客；（谢复兴）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">12</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白发苍颜慰世情。（黄奕丽）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花放香飘蛱蝶飞。（黄奕丽）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仙娥阆苑，梦回孤枕泪；（黄奕丽）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block">13</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉指朱弦倾素怀。（陈锡钟）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖云蒸蛱蝶迷。（陈锡钟）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">醉翁蓬岛，酣于千日酒；（陈锡钟）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block">14</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">陋室清茶益夏安。（萧光峥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁〉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">旌展灯妍画意兴。（萧光峥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">影人雪地，摄来三峡景；（萧光峥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block">15</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">碧水扁舟映晚霞。（金戈）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">地暖雪融田父忙。（金戈）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">游人柳岸，流连千树绿；（金戈）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block">16</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠岭金晖照画楼。（草农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水静湖平画桨移。（草农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">樵夫松岭，邀来三树月；（草农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">17</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫燕芳泥垒福居。（邓衍森）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨过蛙歌春涧欢。（邓衍森）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">项王垓下，延留千古恨；（邓衍森)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">漁父桃源，钓出一舟春。(李国梁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">18</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；(李国梁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古井新茶敬客人。(马文炎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；(李国梁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨点荷开夏日催。(马文炎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">农人梅嶺，种来千树景；(马文炎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。(李国梁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block">19</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫气苍云绕草堂。（瑛子）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨过花酣杜宇回。（瑛子）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">樵翁林壑，往穿三座岭；（瑛子）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">20</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋馆香茶暖客心。（冯秀景）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歌唱年丰爆竹欢。（冯秀景）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗人秋夜，吟来千嶂月；（冯秀景）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">21</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">明月清风忆故人。（魏祖新）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨吻花羞蝴蝶飞。（魏祖新）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">樵夫梅岭，挑来三隐梦；（魏祖新）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block">李国梁、陈锡钟联/谢复兴书</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">22</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">佳字清词赠友人。（素月明善）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；(李国梁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖花明古道延。（素月明善）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗人梅岭，书来千树蕊；（素月明善）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓岀一舟春。(李国梁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">23</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠径清风醉寸心。（崔素萍）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日出花酣紫燕啼。（崔素萍）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">耕夫落日，摇收满眼秋；（崔素萍）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">24</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红炉绿酒温春夜；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秀阁清音慰素心。（付细娥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳醒秋千荡；（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨润草酥紫燕啼。（付细娥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘郎石室，携回烂柄斧；（付细娥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父桃源，钓出一舟春。（李国梁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">三、学联絮语</b></p><p class="ql-block"> 李国梁</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 本期出句以春景融情，营造温存浪漫的气氛。笔法实中见虚，求稳健洒脱灵动。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ①红炉，取古句：红炉小火。良宵温酒，自当浓醉温馨之情调。岂止温酒，则寓岁时佳境之暖意。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ②何谓柳醒？化典事也。汉苑有柳如人形，日三眠三起，后称三眠柳，喻春色亦喻女郎惺忪睡眼，纤腰娴仪。故荡秋千可联想，顺理成章。空灵笔意，求鲜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ③桃源指永安桃源洞风景胜地。小桥锁洞，春涧漂落红。樵歌林籁，鸥鸟忘机，渔筏能不撑出春光？桃源亦可泛指佳境。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 此联难点在“一舟春”三字。先要理解出句之意，再析语法结构，词性句式，对起来就会更顺利。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 本期出句中的：秋千、渔父、一舟春，让大家费神。对秋千结构不太理解，樵对渔，多见，舟是名词，用量词对，有的较顺，有的勉强。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 其实这些都无大碍，主要是看构思，能否使情境与语境融洽。不必简单机械地以词性语法结构来苛求。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 写作技法多，且灵活。如错位交叉，应对人名物名景名及嵌字联等，词性结构可以略作调配，也可用字面对等技法。总之，要看思想内容艺术表达的效果。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 所以，秋千、渔父、一舟春，可宽容偏正等结构。要根据主题的需要而为，这在古诗联亦见。过于追求工整，情感、思路受限放不开，刻板无趣，会失去张力与感染力。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 对联花样多较复杂，我们习作的是律句类，格律要求较严。而实用通俗、游戏趣味、即兴打油类，不太讲究联律，宽容空间大。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 遵律而行，避违规，免硬伤，乃基本要求。当然作品的质量还要看其艺术表现力。境界、格调、神韵等方面，情感抒发，语言表达，真切到位至关重要。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 这里先说“隔景”。我在前面已说过上、下联要谐，无论是正对还是反对，要注意脉顺，亦要有距离，避合掌，又不能太大而致泛散，与无情对不一样。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 上下联要形成一个大环境下的两个场景，相衬不跳脱。古诗联有许多佳句，如：白日依山尽，黄河入海流。脉何其畅，境何其妙？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 在构思时，要注意全联的艺术形象，求效果，也就是意象的离合协调。反之就有隔感，隔景易隔意，即使反对也当注意。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block">主办：三明市诗词学会</p><p class="ql-block">承办：福建省楹联学会会员群（三明）</p><p class="ql-block">指导教师：李国梁、林日上、徐肇敏</p><p class="ql-block">顾问：马玉太、潘文轩、吴松</p><p class="ql-block">《楹联微刊》</p><p class="ql-block">主编：陈金清</p><p class="ql-block">副主编：李国梁 余秋兰</p><p class="ql-block">收稿：刘子荣</p><p class="ql-block">终审：曾齐禄</p><p class="ql-block">群管：罗春华</p><p class="ql-block">本期制作：一叶知秋</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p>