江城子 (雨点词)

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<p class="ql-block">Part 13</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 喜欢《江城子》继而学填《江城子》,最最直接的诱因是《伊人夜话》里的主角香云儿所填一曲《江城子 · 古城追思》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 香云儿又名云朵儿,黄浦江畔一个教数学的人,居然把个《江城子 · 古城追思》弄得唐砖汉瓦古韵悠悠。一读再读伊的《江城子 》,禁不住来了东施效颦的冲动。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 然而几经东施效颦终究还是难逃一个东施,咱无论如何也没办法把《江城子》填出古色古香味道来。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">那么就反其道而行事来个古韵新声,权当自我消遣罢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江城子格律 (定格)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">中平中仄仄平平(韵)。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仄平平,仄平平(韵)。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">中仄中平,中仄仄平平(韵)。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">中仄中平平仄仄,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">平仄仄,仄平平(韵)。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">中平中仄仄平平(韵)。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仄平平,仄平平(韵)。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">中平中仄,中仄仄平平(韵)。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">中仄中平平仄仄,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">平仄仄,仄平平(韵)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">《江城子》于唐代兴起之时多为单调。只是到了宋代,由苏轼老先生变单调为双调,平韵。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">多以记事抒发情怀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江城子 伊人斗趣谈</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香云出句对长联,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">调宽宽,律严严。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">流水行云,梁上燕子闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月麦田挖荠菜,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">麻古草,弃之闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">可怜雨点对不全,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">韵更改,字频添。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">偷梁换柱,野蒜对红莲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">小卖提篮青箬笋,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">皮厚厚,嘴尖尖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江城子 翠鸟戏刘郎 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">多情水鸟秀时装,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">褂宽宽, 裤长长。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠盖红樱,翎翅配橙黄。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">顾自风流抛媚眼,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仿鹬立,逗刘郎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">轻启长镜对焦光,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">屏呼吸,构图张。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">快门半按, 心跳小彷徨。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一跃腾空飞却去,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">真沮丧,又空忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江城子 送香云出游西域</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香云西域去云游,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">过河南,走商丘。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">明月清风,短信挂长途。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">万里西宁当日暮,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">投客栈,住沙州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">韶华往事水东流,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莫高窟,万象图,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本生故事,九色鹿王愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">转世轮回谁历见?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">经变画,也模糊!</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">四</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江城子 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">兔年正月初一东方禅寺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烧香拜佛图</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新年膜拜抢头筹,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">早啼鸡,满加油,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">见庙烧香,泥塑也磕头。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">各路神祇多护佑,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">南拜拜,北求求。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">东方禅寺涌车流,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">撞大钟,点高烛,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">贾商权贵,且跪且磕头。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">富贵求得天地久,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红钞票,有的收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江城子 盼雪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬来最盼雪飞檐,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">醒虬枝,闹阶前,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">盖地铺天,扯絮也拉绵,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">堆个雪人当院站,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春近也,过新年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大雪预报到江南,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">你欢喜,我喜欢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凭栏倚户,灯火睡无眠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">邻里祝福相守望,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">祥瑞雪,报平安。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">六</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江城子 夜雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">是谁夜半讨人嫌?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舞长鞭,过风檐,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">噼里啪啦,落玉滚珠盘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">光影浮窗还闪电,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雷滚滚,雨涟涟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">那人枕畔正酣眠,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">褥绵柔,被柔绵,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风吟雨唱,还梦入管弦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">何处归来闲杜宇,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">没事干,唤插田。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江城子 致友人 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">君差令媛到寒门,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">共书灯,念洋文,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">结构文法,行笔仿英伦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">解惑答疑本份事,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挟惬意,弄耕耘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">相逢初见忆犹真,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暑炎天,汗涔涔,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雅儒朗俊,轻叩小柴门。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清茶一杯款待你,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">相见晚,故乡人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">八</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江城子 路遇古村上冯</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莺飞草长好晴天,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">阚家山,伍夫园,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">唤嫂呼姑,寻趣柳如烟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水复山重都是路,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坡转转,岭旋旋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花明柳暗古村前,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">马头墙,黛瓦檐</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃源世外,爹树草遮颜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">标语墙头繁体字,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">“寔”咋念?愣无言。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">九</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江城子 海默与胡敲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">哲人海默弄胡敲,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛绳索,系横腰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抖动翻飞,接住却扬抛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">游戏循环陀螺转,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">携意趣,健身宝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">空竹宝贝老胡敲,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">酒装瓶,换商标。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一脉相承,淘气尽摇头。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风物人情皆世故,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">今古事,一书包。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江城子 福岛地震记事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">九级地震一时间,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">地翻倾,砾石填,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">壮士五十,赴难补桑田。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">倒海施援核电站,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燃料棒,冒青烟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一衣带水两连牵,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月笼明,水笼烟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">城门失火,池水晾鱼干</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">海域东瀛沿海事,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">核演变,抢食盐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p>