2021-2022高二期中考作文赏析

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<p class="ql-block">假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter听说在中国,现在人工智能已经都进入人们的日常生活,其中包括旅游业。他来信询问你十一假期是否有这方面的体会并且向他们介绍。</p><p class="ql-block">内容包括:(1)人工智能在旅游业的应用,例如:门票无需用现金支付,景区检票可以通过人脸识别,等等。(2)邀请他来体验。</p><p class="ql-block">注意:(1)写作词数在100左右;</p><p class="ql-block">(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;</p><p class="ql-block">(3) 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总次数。</p><p class="ql-block">参考词汇:face recognition</p><p class="ql-block">Dear Peter,</p><p class="ql-block"> Iˈm happy to hear from you. ____________________________________________________</p><p class="ql-block">________________________________________________________________________________</p><p class="ql-block">________________________________________________________________________________</p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"> Looking forward to your arrival.</p><p class="ql-block"> Yours,</p><p class="ql-block"> Li Hua</p> <p class="ql-block">Dear Peter,</p><p class="ql-block"> Iˈm happy to hear from you. Just as you have learned, artificial intelligence is now widely used in China. Here Iˈd like to share with you what I experienced during the week-long National Day holiday.</p><p class="ql-block"> ①When traveling, we were amazed at the changes and convenience brought by artificial intelligence. First of all, ②wherever and whenever we went, we could use the mobile payment. ③More interesting, we no longer had to get into tourist attractions with the ID card. We could do it through a face recognition app now, which really saved time so that we didnˈt have to wait in queue. What an amazing experience!</p><p class="ql-block"> I do hope you can come to China and experienced all of this when you have spare time. Looking forward to your arrival.</p><p class="ql-block"> Yours truly,</p><p class="ql-block"> LiHua</p> <p class="ql-block">【思路点拨】</p><p class="ql-block">本文属于应用文中的邀请信。人称为第一人称,时态为一般过去式为主。要求学生根据所给内容提示展开来写。注意衔接词的使用,注意句式多样。可适当增加细节。</p><p class="ql-block">【亮点词汇】</p><p class="ql-block">①.be amazed at对……吃惊;</p><p class="ql-block">②First of all首先;</p><p class="ql-block">③More interestingly更有趣的是</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">【高分句型】</p><p class="ql-block">①.When traveling, we were amazed at the convenience brought by artificial intelligence.(when引导时间状语从句的省略)</p><p class="ql-block">②wherever and whenever we went, we could use the mobile payment.(wh-ever引导让步状语从句)</p><p class="ql-block">③.More interestingly, through a face recognition app, we no longer had to get into tourist attractions with the ID card, which really saved us the trouble of waiting in a queue.(which引导非限制性定语从句)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">【结构布局】</p><p class="ql-block">引言:写信目的</p><p class="ql-block">中心:人工智能在旅游业的应用</p><p class="ql-block">​​​​​​​结尾:邀请他来体验</p> <p class="ql-block">美文欣赏</p>

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