<p class="ql-block">Excellent！</p> <p class="ql-block">Great！</p> <p class="ql-block">前面对了，后面两个“你”都错了，要细心！</p> <p class="ql-block">画画水平有待提高！</p> <p class="ql-block">一个快乐的女孩！</p> <p class="ql-block">笔记做的不错，strong是story;二十个🎈 twenty balloons！</p> <p class="ql-block">I like apples. （细心）</p><p class="ql-block">You can play the piano.（与球类运动不同，乐器类前面要加定冠词the）</p> <p class="ql-block">We are best friends.</p> <p class="ql-block">还有两处错误：eat不需要双写t,直接加</p><p class="ql-block">ing; together拼写还是有错误哦！</p> <p class="ql-block">I like all the animals. </p><p class="ql-block">From this sentence， I see you are a kind girl.</p><p class="ql-block">You like elephants.</p> <p class="ql-block">这是like加动词最多的一篇写话，like后面要加动词的ing形式，还有一处错误就是漏写can't.You like singing, but you can't sing well.</p> <p class="ql-block">动物描述的很好，</p><p class="ql-block">注意foot的复数是feet;怪物monster</p><p class="ql-block">You like singing.</p><p class="ql-block">You like durains.</p><p class="ql-block">Do you like durians?</p> <p class="ql-block">书写漂亮；第三人称单数用的不错；</p><p class="ql-block">He likes Maths. I like Maths too.</p><p class="ql-block"> And I like English.</p> <p class="ql-block">两个一般疑问句，在这里描述朋友不太适合哦，还是用陈述句适合！</p> <p class="ql-block">Great!皓轩，画画水平也有待提高哦！</p> <p class="ql-block">篇幅比较长的一篇，建议用杨淳钰同学的标题《My friend and I》；She can't like…可能是笔误吧，要用She doesn't like…</p><p class="ql-block">together拼写也有误</p><p class="ql-block">最后一句话写的不错！</p> <p class="ql-block">这一次写话整体还是不错的，其实要求写朋友的时候是用第二人称you，所以用第三人称she/he,难度会加大！</p><p class="ql-block">如果上面还有错误，没有指出的话，请见谅！</p><p class="ql-block">最后分享一张来自我家娃家长会的一段话！</p>