<p class="ql-block">中英对照修订版</p><p class="ql-block">Revised Version </p><p class="ql-block">2021/10/13-17</p> <p class="ql-block">以下这首诗歌和书法作者是我的大哥夷牧(贻模), 他是中国作协会员，书法传人。</p><p class="ql-block">The following is a poem written and </p><p class="ql-block">favoured by my elder brother Yimu </p><p class="ql-block">Jiang in his own handwriting .He is a </p><p class="ql-block">member of China Writers Association, a calligrapher.</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">我是云，</p><p class="ql-block">I am a cloud </p><p class="ql-block">我的世界没有围墙；</p><p class="ql-block">My world sees no walls </p><p class="ql-block">风是我的翅膀，</p><p class="ql-block">The wind has become my wings </p><p class="ql-block">自由是故乡。</p><p class="ql-block">and freedom, my homeland.</p> <p class="ql-block">兄弟小聚，蒋驰摄于2021年10月13日上海。</p><p class="ql-block">A picture of three brothers shot by my</p><p class="ql-block">nephew Chi Jiang on October 13,2021.</p> <p class="ql-block">致大哥-贻乐</p><p class="ql-block">昨天，</p><p class="ql-block">重阳节前，</p><p class="ql-block">我看到您，</p><p class="ql-block">用您的左手指写了一次又一次美，美，</p><p class="ql-block">提示我们在美国和世界上的亲族；</p><p class="ql-block">您又画了8080，画了一圈又一圈，</p><p class="ql-block">象征您走完了人生的第一圈。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">自由自由，我明白一直是您的追求；</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">世界世界，我知道到处都可以成为您的家园。</p><p class="ql-block">(蒋驰摄影)</p> <p class="ql-block">To My Elder Brother YiMu</p><p class="ql-block">By YiLe</p><p class="ql-block">Yesterday </p><p class="ql-block">before the arrival of the Elders' Festival</p><p class="ql-block">I saw you</p><p class="ql-block">writing with one finger of your left hand the Chinese character 美 a few times, </p><p class="ql-block">reminding us of our dear ones </p><p class="ql-block">in America and elsewhere in the world,</p><p class="ql-block">and drawing the number 80 and 80,</p><p class="ql-block">signifying you have completed your </p><p class="ql-block">journey of 80 years,</p><p class="ql-block">first time in your Life.</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Freedom and freedom，</p><p class="ql-block">I understand it is your unchanged pursuit.</p><p class="ql-block">World and world，</p><p class="ql-block"> I know any part of it may become your homeland.</p><p class="ql-block">(photo by 驰）</p> <p class="ql-block">大哥在重温自己的作品，同时阅读我写给他的小诗。我们之间实现了异地交流。</p><p class="ql-block">摄像蒋驰。</p><p class="ql-block">My elder brother is reading his own </p><p class="ql-block">works and the poem I wrote and </p><p class="ql-block">sent him. First time we made a </p><p class="ql-block">success to communicate with each</p><p class="ql-block">other online in such a marvelous and</p><p class="ql-block">vivid manner.</p><p class="ql-block">The life video, which is a snapshot , was made by the only son of my elder </p><p class="ql-block">brother Chi Jiang.</p> <p class="ql-block">今天上午我又看到我的嫂子，大哥的妻子，发到我的家庭群一首我大哥从前写重阳节的散文诗。我大哥的儿子和他的妻子在他病后给了他无微不至的关怀。</p><p class="ql-block">This morning I saw another poem by </p><p class="ql-block">Yimu introduced as follows to our big</p><p class="ql-block"> family chatting group by his Wife </p><p class="ql-block">Yanping.</p><p class="ql-block">His son and Wife have rendered him </p><p class="ql-block">meticulous care after he suffered a </p><p class="ql-block">stroke.</p> <p class="ql-block">侄子看了此美篇给我传来了以下反馈，是用英文写的。</p><p class="ql-block">A feedback I received from my </p><p class="ql-block">nephew is given In English as follows.</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">Btw. Seeing his very seldom feedback my assumption is he understands this article I sent him. And over last few months seeing the overall less than 10 feedback including yesterday , I could see each time why ; and accordingly I defer that he is not blindingly or unconsciously give his thumb up. Rather he’s being very selective e[捂脸][捂脸]</p> <p class="ql-block">我让微信做了翻译，译文如下：</p><p class="ql-block">Translation into Chinese is well done by</p><p class="ql-block">Wechat, which may make translators</p><p class="ql-block">lose their job.</p> <p class="ql-block">btw看他很少反馈我的假设是他明白我发给他的这篇文章。在过去的几个月里，包括昨天在内，收到的反馈总共不到 10 条，我每次都能看出原因所在；因此我推想，他不是盲目地或无意识地竖起大拇指。相反，他是非常有选择性的[捂脸][捂脸]</p> <p class="ql-block">翻译🉐非常不错，看来当代社会翻译工作者要失业了。</p> <p class="ql-block">我的另一位弟弟日后又拜访我大哥在上海的家，侄子又拍了个有关的视频。</p><p class="ql-block">Days later my youngest brother had a</p><p class="ql-block">visit to my elder-brother's home and they talked about the poems exchanged </p><p class="ql-block">between brothers.</p> <p class="ql-block">谢谢各位点赞送花，此截屏只显示了点赞和送花朋友一小部分。</p><p class="ql-block">Thank you for your flowers and praises.</p><p class="ql-block">This is only a sample page of many that record the number of flowers and </p><p class="ql-block">praises received.</p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">记住你年轻的时候，不管你现在多大年纪。你今天永远比明天年轻。</p><p class="ql-block">Remember the day when you were</p><p class="ql-block">younger regardless of how old you are </p><p class="ql-block">today. You are always younger than</p><p class="ql-block">tomorrow.</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p>