<div>收录：陈林（超乐人求是缘-永吉）</div><div>编辑：陈林（超乐人求是缘-永吉）</div><div>简评：陈林（超乐人求是缘-永吉）</div><div>摄影：陈林（超乐人求是缘-永吉）</div>2021年8月湄潭对联第四次作业。<br data-filtered="filtered">一、题目：请您对下联。上联：咬文嚼字吐新作；（选自《对联》）<br data-filtered="filtered">二、请联友定稿后接龙发到群里。陈林负责收稿，8月30日截稿。<br data-filtered="filtered"><br data-filtered="filtered">1. 陈林<br data-filtered="filtered">博古览今读美篇。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：拙作，以抛砖引玉。<br data-filtered="filtered">2.姜兰<br data-filtered="filtered">刮肚搜肠对下联。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">3. 娄山<br data-filtered="filtered">费雪飞霜写雅章。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：“费雪”费解。<br data-filtered="filtered">4.孙传友<br data-filtered="filtered">晃脑摇头吟古篇。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：优。<br data-filtered="filtered">5.熊光明<br data-filtered="filtered">把酒临风歌盛情。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：优。<br data-filtered="filtered">6.李家举<br data-filtered="filtered">绘景描图写锦章。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">7.王礼坤<br data-filtered="filtered">赋韵题诗忆旧情。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">8.马传学<br data-filtered="filtered">依山傍水绘锦绣。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：“山”平当仄，“水”仄当平，“绣”仄当平。可改为：傍水依山绘锦图。<br data-filtered="filtered">9.宋忠睿<br data-filtered="filtered">煮酒吟诗赏雪花。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">10.覃林<br data-filtered="filtered">摘句寻章填旧词。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">11.湛制宪<br data-filtered="filtered">念友思朋怀旧情。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：优。<br data-filtered="filtered">12.罗毅<br data-filtered="filtered">聚友邀朋开老坛。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：优。<br data-filtered="filtered">13.徐洪喜<br data-filtered="filtered">吃醋争风传丑闻。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：优。<br data-filtered="filtered">14.刘国涌<br data-filtered="filtered">携礼驱车回故乡。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：优。<br data-filtered="filtered">15.晏铭<br data-filtered="filtered">把盏推杯叙旧情。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：优。<br data-filtered="filtered">16.陈忠敏<br data-filtered="filtered">造句遣词出好篇。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">17.郭福豪<br data-filtered="filtered">闭目低头忆旧家。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：优。<br data-filtered="filtered">18.刘丞涛<br data-filtered="filtered">纳语吟诗展锦心。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">19.石元良<br data-filtered="filtered">吟诗作对歌盛世。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：“诗”平当仄，“对”仄当平。“世”仄当平。<br data-filtered="filtered">20.李家广<br data-filtered="filtered">借物传情著锦篇。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：合格。<div><div>21.陈涛<br data-filtered="filtered">看水观山思故情。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：优。<br data-filtered="filtered">22.刘仲举<br data-filtered="filtered">游目骋怀吟大江。<br data-filtered="filtered">简评：优。<br data-filtered="filtered">23.何登峰<br data-filtered="filtered">横槊赋诗传古风。<br data-filtered="filtered"></div><div>简评：优。</div><div><br data-filtered="filtered"></div></div> 湄潭县城夜景