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一年级要想写好看图写话,需要做好以下几点:
1、写话的最基本要求。
要明确这五个要素:什么时间、谁、在哪儿、干什么、结果怎样(或心情如何)。
2、看 ----仔细观察图片:谁在哪里干什么?
3、找 ----时间、地点、人物、事情各是什么?在图上找出来。
4、想----结合图片,发挥想象,丰富图片的内容。
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小学低年级作文能力的培养,应该从看图写话训练起步。看图写话是作文最初步的训练,是培养刚刚进入小学的孩子的认识能力、形象思维能力、想象能力和表达能力的良好途径。
“看图写话”七大口诀
专项看图写话并不难,仔细观察放眼前。
一看环境和人物,二看动作和表情。
一丝一毫看得准,融入生活来想象。
原因经过加结果,事情过程才完成。
口头说通莫忘记,时间地点要说清。
心理想法和语言,二者一样不能丢。
记住看图写话歌,下笔流畅有神功。
“看图写话”常用句式
1、句型组织
“三素句”谁在哪儿干什么
“四素句”什么时间谁在哪儿干什么
“五素句”什么时间谁在哪儿干什么结果如何/心情怎样
2、10大万能句式
“...在...”同学们在操场上做游戏。
“...听...”我听见了一阵敲门声。
“...看...”我看见老师正在批改作业。
“...是...”我是一名少先队员。
“...把...”她把地上的纸捡了起来。
“...被...”小夏没写完作业被老师批评了。
“...感...”今天考试我得了满分,我感到很高兴。
“...想...”我心想:我们班一定要得第一!
“...说...”老师说:“咱们班的同学真棒!
“看图写话”七大步骤
1、按照顺序看图,对画面所表达的主要内容先有一个整体性的了解,学会安排文章结构:
首先,要说清时间、地点、谁在做什么?周围有什么景物?它们给你什么样的感觉等?然后把事情的起因、经过和结果说清,适当增加心理描写和对话。
2、从画面中人物的形体、相貌、服饰等,弄清人物的性别、年龄、身份。
3、从人物的表情、动作,推测人物的思想,以及他在干什么,想什么。
4、还要观察周围环境,弄清事情发生在什么时候,什么地方等等。
5、适当发挥想象力,自己在脑海里浮现出事情的前因后果。
6、先说后写
a.要先看明白,在想象的基础上,然后组织语言说出来,要求说得有头有尾,要遵循一定顺序,条理清楚,表达完整,声音响亮,并使用普通话。
b.对于一年级的小朋友,只要用一两句话写清“时间、地点、人物,干什么”就行了。慢慢地随着学生阅读量的增加,思维能力和口语表达的提升。就要求学生不仅要写完整,更是要写得具体、生动。写出人物的语言、神态、动作等等。
7、培养写作积极性
要想让在写作上刚刚起步的孩子们越写越有劲,越来越自信,就得让他们的进步得到老师和同学们的承认和肯定,享受成功的喜悦。
示例一:
优家晚陪教室
首先,同学们看到这里有3张图。从图片顺序能知道讲的是啄木鸟给大树捉虫的故事。所以,我们首先给自己定一个题目,可以叫《啄木鸟医生》,也可以叫《树爷爷病了》、《森林医生》等。
确定好题目后,我们来看如何来写这篇习作。
首先看第一幅图,回答以下问题:
第一幅图
a.这是什么季节?(写一句天气或季节的描写)
b.图上有谁?(树爷爷)
c.它怎么了?(身上爬满了虫子,生病了)
d.它有什么样的表情?(愁眉苦脸、哭丧着脸、一脸痛苦)
第二幅图
a.谁来了?(啄木鸟医生)
b.它会和大树爷爷说什么?(想象一下啄木鸟和树爷爷的对话)
c.它做了什么?(捉虫,注意把捉虫的动作写清楚)
第三幅图
a.什么结果?(虫被捉完了,树爷爷病好了,长出了茂密的绿叶)
b.树爷爷什么表情?(开心地笑了)
c.树爷爷会对啄木鸟说些什么?(感谢的话)
按照以上顺序完成习作,就是一篇故事完整、结构清晰的作文,在对话和动作描写上生动一点,就是一篇不错的满分作文了。
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1、写话的最基本要求。
要明确这五个要素:什么时间、谁、在哪儿、干什么、结果怎样(或心情如何)。
2、看 ----仔细观察图片:谁在哪里干什么?
3、找 ----时间、地点、人物、事情各是什么?在图上找出来。
4、想----结合图片,发挥想象,丰富图片的内容。
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小学低年级作文能力的培养,应该从看图写话训练起步。看图写话是作文最初步的训练,是培养刚刚进入小学的孩子的认识能力、形象思维能力、想象能力和表达能力的良好途径。
“看图写话”七大口诀
专项看图写话并不难,仔细观察放眼前。
一看环境和人物,二看动作和表情。
一丝一毫看得准,融入生活来想象。
原因经过加结果,事情过程才完成。
口头说通莫忘记,时间地点要说清。
心理想法和语言,二者一样不能丢。
记住看图写话歌,下笔流畅有神功。
“看图写话”常用句式
1、句型组织
“三素句”谁在哪儿干什么
“四素句”什么时间谁在哪儿干什么
“五素句”什么时间谁在哪儿干什么结果如何/心情怎样
2、10大万能句式
“...在...”同学们在操场上做游戏。
“...听...”我听见了一阵敲门声。
“...看...”我看见老师正在批改作业。
“...是...”我是一名少先队员。
“...把...”她把地上的纸捡了起来。
“...被...”小夏没写完作业被老师批评了。
“...感...”今天考试我得了满分,我感到很高兴。
“...想...”我心想:我们班一定要得第一!
“...说...”老师说:“咱们班的同学真棒!
“看图写话”七大步骤
1、按照顺序看图,对画面所表达的主要内容先有一个整体性的了解,学会安排文章结构:
首先,要说清时间、地点、谁在做什么?周围有什么景物?它们给你什么样的感觉等?然后把事情的起因、经过和结果说清,适当增加心理描写和对话。
2、从画面中人物的形体、相貌、服饰等,弄清人物的性别、年龄、身份。
3、从人物的表情、动作,推测人物的思想,以及他在干什么,想什么。
4、还要观察周围环境,弄清事情发生在什么时候,什么地方等等。
5、适当发挥想象力,自己在脑海里浮现出事情的前因后果。
6、先说后写
a.要先看明白,在想象的基础上,然后组织语言说出来,要求说得有头有尾,要遵循一定顺序,条理清楚,表达完整,声音响亮,并使用普通话。
b.对于一年级的小朋友,只要用一两句话写清“时间、地点、人物,干什么”就行了。慢慢地随着学生阅读量的增加,思维能力和口语表达的提升。就要求学生不仅要写完整,更是要写得具体、生动。写出人物的语言、神态、动作等等。
7、培养写作积极性
要想让在写作上刚刚起步的孩子们越写越有劲,越来越自信,就得让他们的进步得到老师和同学们的承认和肯定,享受成功的喜悦。
示例一:
优家晚陪教室
首先,同学们看到这里有3张图。从图片顺序能知道讲的是啄木鸟给大树捉虫的故事。所以,我们首先给自己定一个题目,可以叫《啄木鸟医生》,也可以叫《树爷爷病了》、《森林医生》等。
确定好题目后,我们来看如何来写这篇习作。
首先看第一幅图,回答以下问题:
第一幅图
a.这是什么季节?(写一句天气或季节的描写)
b.图上有谁?(树爷爷)
c.它怎么了?(身上爬满了虫子,生病了)
d.它有什么样的表情?(愁眉苦脸、哭丧着脸、一脸痛苦)
第二幅图
a.谁来了?(啄木鸟医生)
b.它会和大树爷爷说什么?(想象一下啄木鸟和树爷爷的对话)
c.它做了什么?(捉虫,注意把捉虫的动作写清楚)
第三幅图
a.什么结果?(虫被捉完了,树爷爷病好了,长出了茂密的绿叶)
b.树爷爷什么表情?(开心地笑了)
c.树爷爷会对啄木鸟说些什么?(感谢的话)
按照以上顺序完成习作,就是一篇故事完整、结构清晰的作文,在对话和动作描写上生动一点,就是一篇不错的满分作文了。
图片发自简书App
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