喝火令集—二十首

杨柳岸晓风残月与宋词

<h3>张福荣: 网名杨柳岸晓风残月,辽宁大连人,1980年出生,水瓶座,属羊,喜欢诗词,爱好文学,近年开始尝试诗词的创作,同时正在创作一部长篇小说,字数预计500万字,跨度约五十年左右,內容涉及官场,商场,情场,小说中穿插社会时事热点事件,对几代人的生活经历,身心感受进行真实描述。</h3> <h3>喝火令 这个词牌范词中最全面的总结出十二字:“二仗一叠三枪一破一衬一应”,网上发现某人把三枪放在原“十字”前头,这是对范词认识的误区,三枪只是精彩的词尾不能作为本词的发端,顺序一定要遵循范词的准则,由于喝火令它不是直叙的所以填起来困难难度加大,其次它的手法多样化,在词的艺术上创造出全新的境界,无论在宋朝还是史上影响之巨大,以宋词老大苏轼并称“苏黄”二人。</h3><h3>1,两仗:分别设在上、下句的发端,为什么要设在上下句的发端呢,无论是抒情还是绘景都能起到艺术性的效果,更能增加词的色彩,喝火令的两仗很重要的,列十二字之首,对仗工整目前常用:“门类对”、“词组结构相对”,所谓“门类对”指:门类相临近的字词互相通对,这类对由于易意重或合掌较适合初学者不说了,“词组结构相对”:指语法结构相同,例:“见晚”对“交疏”它是动形对动形这种结构叫“动补结构”,也是对仗中最派头的玩法。</h3><h3>2,一叠:指叠词,叠词多选用实字+虚字,这样选有什么好处:(1)起突出强调作用(2)避开了直接叙述,(3),上文与下文衔接更加自然流畅。</h3><h3>3,三枪:也叫三叠是由三句复式结构的句子组成的,复式结构的句子用在词中什么意义,这是很多人都没听过的,没听过应用起来使句子生涩,它的意义:就是把结构不整齐的句子串联形成一句完整的句子,把词的观赏性、色彩性、艺术性提升到一个高度上的境界,任何词牌都不具备这境界的,既然是结构的句子就要讲究应用结构来相对,不是网上说的喝火令三枪只能是并列名词来摊破递进的,不是古人画只猫你就一辈子只画猫这是伪科学的,科学依据:只要是上、下结构相同的句子都能作递进的句子。</h3><h3>4,一破一衬放在一起讲容易理解:(1),一破:喝火令摊破的是词性,晓也星稀,晓也是叠词不能被摊破的,“星稀”这俩字摊破第一字“星”,“星”是名词范词摊破的是名词,摊破名词有什么意义:和它的闺怨词调有关的,情感愁苦排遣之后这时应放缓笔调写出无奈离别之情。</h3><h3>(2),一衬:指上片六言句与三叠六言衬句相衬,何谓相衬:动与静相衬等,上下相衬要求相对高的,派的玩法应是景情来相衬,并且有特殊要求“愁景衬乐情”反之也可,“乐景衬愁情”。</h3><h3>5,一应:修饰手法中有一种手法叫对应,范词中何谓对应:上、下合句“词性相同,意思相近”这八字解释下:“词性相同”:要求对仗,除第一字平仄应相反,剩下字词与偶句相同,“意思相近”:“上合句叙离、下合句也应叙离”也可“上合句叙合、下合句也应叙合”,这是对应手法的特点,必须遵循的。</h3> <h3>1 喝火令-渡劫</h3><h3>中華新韻</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/楊柳岸曉風殘月</h3><h3>遼寧.大連</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>戊戊年六月初七作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>感動難常在,無眠到五更。淚花一朵慰平生。 流落世間七種,只待九霄重。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>左輔推輪透,天狼耀日紅。六吉七煞浪頭逢。大浪淘沙,大浪盡頭空。大浪幻雲千朵,不與舊時同。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><h3 style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">流落世間七種,只待九霄重。</h3><h3 style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">淘盡幻雲千朵,不與舊時同。</h3> <h3>2 <span style="line-height: 1.8;">喝火令-風雨</span></h3><h3>中華新韻</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/楊柳岸曉風殘月</h3><h3>遼寧.大連</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>戊戊年六月十三作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>曉月分雲去,殘風弄影急。曉風殘月夜鶯啼。</h3><h3>流落可逢萍水,緣聚更相惜。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>小雨階前落,輕煙壁後集。飲湖微醉使人迷。</h3><h3>此次別離,此次去無息。此次恐分天各,後會也無期。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><h3 style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">流落可逢萍水,緣聚更相惜。</h3><h3 style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">別去恐分天各,後會也無期。</h3><h3><br></h3> <h3>3 <span style="line-height: 1.8;">喝火令-清風明月</span></h3><h3>中華新韻</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/楊柳岸曉風殘月</h3><h3>遼寧.大連</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>戊戊年六月十五作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>綠水門前過,青山草上升。夜風搖動谷空寧。仍是冷貼幽枕,抬首對昏燈。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>那夜三山隱,今朝四海行。夢悠悠幾載重逢。浪漫不絕,浪漫過長空。浪漫醉擁明月,展手有清風。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><h3><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">仍</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">是</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">冷</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">貼</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">幽</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">枕,抬首對昏燈。</span><br></h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">不過醉擁明月,展手有清風。</h3><h3><br></h3> <h3>4 喝火令-一方</h3><h3>中華新韻</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/楊柳岸曉風殘月</h3><h3>遼寧.大連</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>戊戌年六月廿三作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>四海皆兄弟,八荒是表堂。</h3><h3>既來之未問吉祥。</h3><h3>雙宿醉心歡笑,開口吐檀香。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>歲月灼華旺,時空轉歲狂。</h3><h3>想如今只剩一方。</h3><h3>只剩孤身,只剩影斜長。只剩落魂流浪,滿面布風霜。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">雙宿醉心歡笑,開口吐檀香。</h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">孤影落魂流浪,滿面布風霜。</span></h3><h3><br></h3> <h3>5 <span style="line-height: 1.8;">喝火令-醉愛</span></h3><h3>中華新韻</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/楊柳岸曉風殘月</h3><h3>遼寧.大連</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>戊戌年六月廿五作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>馬躍三峽澗,龍騰四海天。善緣結遍度前關。緣起雨風無阻,酣夢百年圓。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>厚愛深如海,真情似鑽堅。此生余愛護清歡。愛是帷房,愛是落雲川,愛是海石長伴。醉愛此生安。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><h3><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">緣</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">起</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">雨</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">風</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">無</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">阻</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">,</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">酣</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">夢</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">百</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">年圓。</span><br></h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">帷落海石長伴,醉愛此生安。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3><br></h3> <h3>6 喝火令-追尋</h3><h3>中華新韻</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/楊柳岸曉風殘月</h3><h3>遼寧.大連</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>戊戌年七月初一作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>不改癡心重,依然愛恨真。慣于俗世撒單純。</h3><h3>前世遍經風雨,無處可追尋。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>剪子石頭布,三元四喜春。老天不負有心人。</h3><h3>只盼今生,只盼后緣深。只盼可安魂夢,永遠不離分。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">前世遍經風雨,無處可追尋。</h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">今后可安魂夢,永遠不離分。</h3><h3><br></h3> <h3>7 <span style="line-height: 1.8;">喝火令-東湖七夕夜</span></h3><h3>中華新韻</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/楊柳岸曉風殘月</h3><h3>遼寧.大連</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>戊戌年七月十三作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>挽手東湖畔,相擁望月閣。水光輕漫影婆娑。</h3><h3>清目澈眸相對,眉眼映銀河。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>是處香浮動,今宵夢淺泊。忘了吟歲月蹉跎。</h3><h3>愛侶櫻前,愛侶口輕合。愛侶淡唇相印,耳畔漾情歌。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">清目澈眸相對,眉眼映銀河。</h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">櫻口淡唇相印,耳畔漾情歌。</h3><h3><br></h3> <h3>8 <span style="line-height: 1.8;">喝火令-登高</span></h3><h3>中华新韵</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/杨柳岸晓风残月</h3><h3>辽宁.大连</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>戊戌年八月初十作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>远影孤帆近,斜风细雨横。夜凄凄醉眼朦胧。</h3><h3>千问九洲灯塔,星火照虚空?</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>少小终为老,薄情亦转浓。岁华风月笑谈中。</h3><h3>俯首一湾,俯首览风松。俯首四方奇岛,碧海映残红。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">千问九洲灯塔,星火照虚空?</h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">一览</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">四方奇岛,碧海映残红。</span><br></h3> <h3>9 <span style="line-height: 1.8;">喝火令-狼藉</span></h3><h3>中华新韵</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/杨柳岸晓风残月</h3><h3>辽宁.大连</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>戊戌年八月十九作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>岁月如川去,年华似梦余。半生摇曳舞崎岖。</h3><h3>冰冻素心三尺,封不住凌虚。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>旧日常欢笑,今时偶叹息。更尘封记忆难及。</h3><h3>岂料风吹,岂料扫秋菊。岂料墨空千里,抹不掉狼藉。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><h3><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">冰</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">冻素心三</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">尺</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">,封不住凌虚。</span><br></h3><h3><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">风</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">扫墨空千里,抹不掉狼藉。</span><br></h3> <h3>10 <span style="line-height: 1.8;">喝火令-漫漫</span></h3><h3>中华新韵</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/杨柳岸晓风残月</h3><h3>辽宁.大连</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>戊戌年九月廿二作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>老树虽常挽,西风却不停。</h3><h3>落黄金满地飘零。</h3><h3>风弄晚秋霜紧,播苦雨难晴。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>梦里痴痴重,窗前冷冷轻。</h3><h3>纵繁华渐渐伶仃。</h3><h3>漫漫烟浓,漫漫拢孤星。漫漫夜空云聚,锁冷月难行。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">风弄晚秋霜紧,播苦雨难晴。</h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">烟拢夜空云聚,锁冷月难行。</h3><h3><br></h3> <h3>11 <span style="line-height: 1.8;">喝火令-温和</span></h3><h3>中华新韵</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/杨柳岸晓风残月</h3><h3>辽宁.大连</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>戊戌年十月初五作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>小径柴门锁,粗绳古井磨。</h3><h3>满庭菊簇正婀娜。</h3><h3>来待四时轮转,随岁月蹉跎。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>皎月穿云烁,清风弄影婆。</h3><h3>九州游遍踏银河。</h3><h3>走过回肠,走过望幽坡。走过半生疲惫,享此刻温和。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">来待四时轮转,随岁月蹉跎。</h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">回望半生疲惫,享此刻温和。</span></h3><h3><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"><br></span></h3> <h3>12 <span style="line-height: 1.8;">喝火令-十月十九记梦</span></h3><h3>中华新韵</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/杨柳岸晓风残月</h3><h3>辽宁.大连</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>戊戌年十月廿一作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>两遇一程短,一别两袖宽。</h3><h3>也曾经似梦清欢。</h3><h3>孤影广寒宫院,从未叹经年。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>酒后烛光扁,樽前皎月圆。</h3><h3>讨来一梦慰情癫。</h3><h3>梦见双飞,梦见燕莺还。</h3><h3>梦见柳侯湖畔,亦在忆从前。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">孤影广寒宫院,从未叹经年。</h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">双燕<span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">柳侯湖畔,亦在忆从前。</span></h3><h3><br></h3> <h3>13 <span style="line-height: 1.8;">喝火令-醉瑶台</span></h3><h3>词林正韵</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/杨柳岸晓风残月</h3><h3>辽宁.大连</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>戊戌年十一月初四作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>昨夜金风纵,今朝玉露埋。</h3><h3>晚霞千里彩云裁。</h3><h3>浮世梦游微醉,林夕桂花开。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>岁月骑双鬓,相思落满腮。</h3><h3>举杯邀月共瑶台。</h3><h3>酒后天昏,酒后道衷怀。酒后露眠轻冷,雨路玉尘来。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><h3><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">浮</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">世梦游微</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">醉</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">,林夕桂花开。</span><br></h3><h3><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">天</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">道露眠轻冷,雨路玉尘来。</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"><br></span></h3> <h3>14 <span style="line-height: 1.8;">喝火令-咏梅</span></h3><h3>词林正韵</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/杨柳岸晓风残月</h3><h3>辽宁.大连</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>戊戌年腊月初二作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>万壑鸿沟上,孤崖峭壁中。</h3><h3>百年常对卧龙松。</h3><h3>千里浊尘欺面,疏影沁香浓。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>不与春芳斗,谈何夏艳同。</h3><h3>此生恬静更从容。</h3><h3>纵使多寒,纵使季风凶。</h3><h3>纵使冷霜冰骨,素雪映娇红。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><h3><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">千</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">里</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">浊</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">尘</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">欺</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">面,疏影沁香浓。</span><br></h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">多季<span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">冷霜冰骨,素雪映娇红。</span></h3> <h3>15 <span style="line-height: 1.8;">喝火令-狼</span></h3><h3>中华新韵</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/杨柳岸晓风残月</h3><h3>辽宁.大连</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>戊戌年腊月初十作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>鹿马逐花紫,牛羊弄草青。</h3><h3>彩云之下现飞鹰。</h3><h3>群草莽冲丘壑,伏水待肥羚。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>朵朵寒梅艳,颗颗瑞叶轻。</h3><h3>看冰霜落满苍穹。</h3><h3>踏雪独行,踏雪雪压松。</h3><h3>踏雪岭朝天阙,望月啸西风。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">群草莽冲丘壑,伏水待肥羚。</h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">独雪<span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">岭朝天阙,望月啸西风。</span></h3> <h3>16 <span style="line-height: 1.8;">喝火令-霸王别姬</span></h3><h3>中华新韵</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/杨柳岸晓风残月</h3><h3>辽宁.大连</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>戊戌年腊月廿一作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>四面悲歌起,八方剑影藏。</h3><h3>倚刀撑马到乌江。</h3><h3>今日永别红粉,阎殿去称王!</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>怎咽香消恨,难平玉损伤。</h3><h3>更风沙荡尽凄凉。</h3><h3>但愿来生,但愿世间长。</h3><h3>但愿共牵酥手,楚地再开疆!</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><h3><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">今</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">日</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">永</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">别</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">红</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">粉</span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;"></span><span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">,阎殿去称王!</span><br></h3><p style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">来世<span style="line-height: 30.6000003814697px;">共牵酥手,楚地再开疆!</span></h3> <h3>17 <span style="line-height: 1.8;">喝火令—盼春归</span></h3><h3>中华新韵</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/杨柳岸晓风残月</h3><h3>辽宁·大连</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>己亥年元月廿二作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>塞北风藏虎,江南雨戏龙。</h3><h3>杏花难见雪压松!</h3><h3>梅落送冬归去,千点映苍穹。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>酒里相思重,心头爱意浓。</h3><h3>几回清梦与君同?</h3><h3>且盼香风,且盼漫山红。</h3><h3>且盼与春同往,万缕醉时空。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><h3>梅落送冬归去,千点映苍穹。</h3><h3>香漫与春同往,万缕醉时空。</h3> <h3>18 <span style="line-height: 1.8;">喝火令—春芽</span></h3><h3>中华新韵</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/杨柳岸晓风残月</h3><h3>辽宁·大连</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>己亥年二月廿六作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>皓雪埋根壮,春风唤物酥。</h3><h3>细躯蠕动此身孤。</h3><h3>何惧暗黑独处,知向上无输!</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>盖土如石轧,游丝似箭出。</h3><h3>引来芳草万千株。</h3><h3>此后随风,此后喜登途。</h3><h3>此后软苏同舞,懂自在知足。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><h3>何惧暗黑独处,知向上无输!</h3><h3>随喜软苏同舞,懂自在知足。</h3> <h3>19 <span style="line-height: 1.8;">喝火令-海埂遐思</span></h3><h3>中华新韵</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/杨柳岸晓风残月</h3><h3>辽宁·大连</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>己亥年四月初二作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>紫槿团团放 ,红樱片片飞。</h3><h3>惹来一对粉蝶追。</h3><h3>逐朵朵滇池浪,直到彩云归。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>脚踏龙门险,胸怀日月辉。</h3><h3>共西山翠翠巍巍。</h3><h3>醉半寻踪,醉半半生回。</h3><h3>醉半场春秋梦,也向汗青挥。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><h3>逐朵朵滇池浪,直到彩云归。</h3><h3>寻半场春秋梦,也向汗青挥。</h3> <h3>20 <span style="line-height: 1.8;">喝火令-微雨织愁浓</span></h3><h3>中华新韵</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>文/杨柳岸晓风残月</h3><h3>辽宁·大连</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>己亥年六月初十作。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>画舫湖心荡,楼亭倒影朦。</h3><h3>晓风拂柳柳迎风。</h3><h3>轻絮总压心重,出镜也空空。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>冷雾缭峰翠,浮云蔽日红。</h3><h3>落花流水去匆匆。</h3><h3>是夜微寒,是夜雨敲桐。</h3><h3>是夜更织愁密,入梦亦浓浓。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>摊破:</h3><h3>轻絮总压心重,出镜也空空。</h3><h3>微雨更织愁密,入梦亦浓浓。</h3>